I think you could wittle the whole thing down to a third of it's current size and have a much more direct impact on the reader.
hm, i think this is a very good point, especially thinking of attention-spans. people are more likely to read something short, and if he want to know more, they simply need a few pointers (simply www.blackironprison.com
would be best, people can memorize that)
about the different sources, i think that's a good thing. if it's not clear they're different sources/writers/pieces, i agree it should be made clearer, but again it lowers the treshold for reading a piece, because it's only a few paragraphs.
practical endaevours, yes, we need more of those. always
please suggest a few, if you've got some
(a collection of these also might make a good page on the wiki, to be crossreferenced with Now What Do I Do?