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« on: December 09, 2007, 01:24:02 am »
www.principiadiscordia.com

might need to hit refresh.

This is crams edition of the black iron prison and still needs tweeking as well as a table of contents made but otherwise its up.

please point out all the stuff thats wrong with it and I will work on fixing it as fast as possible

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Re: *cough*
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2007, 02:14:06 am »
first off,

:mittens:

second,

Page 16 - "and it is increasing rapidly" is too high. It should be the last line of the page.
Page 17 - background image is tiled but it should be centered or stretched or something.
general - in a few places, the words run right up against the margin. I think it would look better with a half inch of white space.

all in all, great work!

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« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2007, 02:19:38 am »
Swote.

A related matter, but my comments at the side of the links were meant for the people looking at them here.  They look a little...out of place, on the page like that.  Just a minor quibble, but it seems a little jarring.

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« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2007, 02:33:32 am »
what do you mean cain I dont follw.

page 16 and 17 edited.

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« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2007, 02:37:29 am »
This is awesome. Thanks Faust, for getting this front page up and running.
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« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2007, 02:44:31 am »
I was just pointing out the link on it.

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« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2007, 02:47:01 am »
what do you mean cain I dont follw.

page 16 and 17 edited.

Sorry, I'm a little over the place right now.  I meant this page http://www.principiadiscordia.com/links.php since we were on main site issues.  I reckon the site names alone should be enough.

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« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2007, 02:49:18 am »
oh ok, lol. will remove.

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« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2007, 02:52:58 am »
I did say hit refresh right, just making it clear there is now a bip link the front page nav bar

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Re: *cough*
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2007, 05:44:22 pm »
yeah i see it. great work!

first thing i can point out that's wrong is that the other links at the frontpage have a slight blurred drop-shadow to them, while the new BIP link doesn't have that.

it's a real tiny detail feel free to ignore it :) but you asked for critique
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« Reply #10 on: December 09, 2007, 11:47:51 pm »
By the way,

when I was designing the new BIP booklet, the front cover was the last thing I did. I really liked the old art that we had on the cover, and I would vote for having that instead of the eye-and-pyramid that we have on the BIP website (which I think is cool too). How do you guys feel about that graphic?

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« Reply #11 on: December 09, 2007, 11:48:39 pm »
yeah, I had to manually chop up that image, it was hard enough to do without the shadow.
I will probably make the table of contents for it tomorrow or something.

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Re: *cough*
« Reply #12 on: December 09, 2007, 11:49:14 pm »
By the way,

when I was designing the new BIP booklet, the front cover was the last thing I did. I really liked the old art that we had on the cover, and I would vote for having that instead of the eye-and-pyramid that we have on the BIP website (which I think is cool too). How do you guys feel about that graphic?

I really like the eye but I can change it if people like.

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« Reply #13 on: December 10, 2007, 12:20:26 am »
small note:

the front page makes reference to the principiadiscordia.com store. Since it's gone, that text should probably be deleted.

also:
Could we use a different font for text? Anything but Arial or Times New Roman. IMHO the only thing worse than those two is comic sans.

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Re: *cough*
« Reply #14 on: December 10, 2007, 12:54:23 am »
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