oh my god, LMNO, that was fucking amazing.
i love the background tune. the very electronic rhytm/percussion (fast and clean, reminds me of Fischerspooner) with the bassline and the guitar tune ... it's just perfect!
near the end (and reading along) i was wondering how you'd pull off that last line, it didn't feel like it would fit in with the way you'd done the rest. the way you handled it, brilliant!
[i still don't like the reverb, but this time it didnt muffle the sound too much that i couldnt make out the words anymore]