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Babo Flatulentius the 3rd

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"Exit" - a poem
« on: July 04, 2017, 11:56:06 pm »
exit

you fake
you break down and cry
donīt  take that step
for heavens sake


fucked up shell
golden inside
a beautiful hell
we hide

itīs written in the books
but weīre too afraid to read
harvest the trees
but never understand the seed

if fear is a demon
I kiss this monsters face
caress a dead heart
and study an insane race



[burp! now my medulla oblongata is itching... meh]

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Re: "Exit" - a poem
« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2017, 03:23:33 pm »
I like it.

I like the meter - the second stanza has a cool little jump at the end