The Black Swordsman- A first serious foray into creative writing.

[Prince Glittersnatch III]

Don't do that, it makes them angry.


And was anyone actually interested in reading the drivel I had originally posted, or shall this rather sad battle continue?

Im much more interested in what you wrote than your little lovers quarrel.

[Don Coyote]

What I had originally posted here has nothing to do with me being a dick to Dok Howl.

ETA

See the OP.

[Storebrand]

It's by no means my preferred genre or writing style but IMO it was well-written for what it was.  It seems like if you scratched that little bit and started over with an outline first it would turn out well.

[Nephew Twiddleton]

What I had originally posted here has nothing to do with me being a dick to Dok Howl.

ETA

See the OP.

THen why did you take it down and bring up you and Dok having problems, if it was not relevant to the thread?

[Prince Glittersnatch III]

What I had originally posted here has nothing to do with me being a dick to Dok Howl.

ETA

See the OP.

Were all quite aware of that, now please post what you originally posted.

[Don Coyote]

What I had originally posted here has nothing to do with me being a dick to Dok Howl.

ETA

See the OP.

THen why did you take it down and bring up you and Dok having problems, if it was not relevant to the thread?

No clue. Probably because I felt that with several people now convinced I am totally without merit they wouldn't even bother looking at it. This was one of my attempts making a non-negative contribution to PD.

[Don Coyote]

Were all quite aware of that, now please post what you originally posted.

http://www.principiadiscordia.com/forum/index.php?topic=26198.msg915611#msg915611

[Nephew Twiddleton]

What I had originally posted here has nothing to do with me being a dick to Dok Howl.

ETA

See the OP.

THen why did you take it down and bring up you and Dok having problems, if it was not relevant to the thread?

No clue. Probably because I felt that with several people now convinced I am totally without merit they wouldn't even bother looking at it. This was one of my attempts making a non-negative contribution to PD.

It definitely left me wanting more. But if you wanted to bring non-negative content to PD, then you shouldn't have made this thread about Dok. Again, don't know what I missed, but really, making this about what ever is between you and him is going to overshadow anything of merit that you contribute. Just my two cents.

[Doktor Howl]

I stopped caring about being credible within the first few pages of my intro to PD.

I really didn't have you pegged for a negative attention junkie.  Heh.  See?  Even I'm wrong, sometimes.

Is this where I post my long explanation on art being effective even if it pisses you off in a vain attempt to justify liking to be an ass?

*shrug*

Whatever turns you on.

That was it actually. Not much to it, as it is a poor justification for something that doesn't need to be justified.


Also, fuck you. I was getting ready to be nice and apolgize and now I want to be stupid again.

Fucking mindlazers.

The bane of my existence is that I make people do bad things.  See what I made you do, for example?

On the plus side, nobody else has to take responsibility for anything, ever.

[BadBeast]

Puts me in mind of Moorcock. Whom I still dig out and re-re- read now and again, and thoroughly enjoy.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=srZY3y0o6Q8&feature=related

[Don Coyote]

The frustrating thing is, I have no idea what I wanted to do with it when I first wrote it. I know it was just meant to be an intro. I'll probably be ripping it apart and making an outline of what I want this story to be.

Thanks for the idea StoreBrand.

[Doktor Howl]

Don't do that, it makes them angry.


And was anyone actually interested in reading the drivel I had originally posted, or shall this rather sad battle continue?

I'm interested. The original has to be more interesting than a load of percent signs. I don't know what went down between you and Dok, but I'll just say in the interim that for most every time I've seen Dok in a row with someone, they deserved it. And when they didn't Dok apologized shortly after.

I have an image to maintain, here.  

[Nephew Twiddleton]

Don't do that, it makes them angry.


And was anyone actually interested in reading the drivel I had originally posted, or shall this rather sad battle continue?

I'm interested. The original has to be more interesting than a load of percent signs. I don't know what went down between you and Dok, but I'll just say in the interim that for most every time I've seen Dok in a row with someone, they deserved it. And when they didn't Dok apologized shortly after.

I have an image to maintain, here.  

Ok, I'll point out then that the one time I can think of is when you got mad at Hawk over a misunderstanding.

[Don Coyote]

I stopped caring about being credible within the first few pages of my intro to PD.

I really didn't have you pegged for a negative attention junkie.  Heh.  See?  Even I'm wrong, sometimes.

Is this where I post my long explanation on art being effective even if it pisses you off in a vain attempt to justify liking to be an ass?

*shrug*

Whatever turns you on.

That was it actually. Not much to it, as it is a poor justification for something that doesn't need to be justified.


Also, fuck you. I was getting ready to be nice and apolgize and now I want to be stupid again.

Fucking mindlazers.

The bane of my existence is that I make people do bad things.  See what I made you do, for example?

On the plus side, nobody else has to take responsibility for anything, ever.

I guess I am still using retardedly passive language. I thought I had made it clear I was owning up to be an ass to you. I am sorry for being a childish ass.

[Doktor Howl]

I stopped caring about being credible within the first few pages of my intro to PD.

I really didn't have you pegged for a negative attention junkie.  Heh.  See?  Even I'm wrong, sometimes.

Is this where I post my long explanation on art being effective even if it pisses you off in a vain attempt to justify liking to be an ass?

*shrug*

Whatever turns you on.

That was it actually. Not much to it, as it is a poor justification for something that doesn't need to be justified.


Also, fuck you. I was getting ready to be nice and apolgize and now I want to be stupid again.

Fucking mindlazers.

The bane of my existence is that I make people do bad things.  See what I made you do, for example?

On the plus side, nobody else has to take responsibility for anything, ever.

I guess I am still using retardedly passive language. I thought I had made it clear I was owning up to be an ass to you. I am sorry for being a childish ass.

Okay.  And I'm sorry for being an overreacting fuckbat.