Lyric help

[LMNO]

Hey, I need some help with lyrics here.

"They tried to tell me, I just wouldn't listen
Tried to show me the bars of my prison
My cell was something I had created
_______________________"



End the couplet with a rhyme that works best for me, and I'll include your name on the credits.

[East Coast Hustle]

Promised no key but still I waited

A cold shell in which I incubated

[East Coast Hustle]

a place where I just masturbated

you think it's cheesy now? well wait 'til it's grated

[AFK]

My Incarceration, I had fated.  (tongue twisty I know)

[LMNO]

Promised no key but still I waited

A cold shell in which I incubated

a place where I just masturbated

you think it's cheesy now? well wait 'til it's grated

:RWHN:

[LMNO]

Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
___________________________
You're the best at being your own jailor

[Suu]

The only 2 words I'm even thinking of that will work are tailor and sailor. 

[LMNO]

Hmmm.



"It's too damn easy to chase your own tail"



...Hmmm.

[hunter s.durden]

Dumb, like your degree came from Baylor.

Fuck Texas.

[LMNO]

Dumb, like your degree came from Baylor.

Fuck Texas.

AWESOME.


I wish I could use that.

[Sir Squid Diddimus]

Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
___________________________
You're the best at being your own jailor

the cat lady screamed out the winder of her trailer

sorry

[Nast]

Tinker, tailor, soldier, sailor?
[/oldtimey]

[LMNO]

Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
___________________________
You're the best at being your own jailor

the cat lady screamed out the winder of her trailer

sorry

That's actually not bad.  Doesn't really fit the mood of what I'm going for, but I like the image when put in context.

[Bebek Sincap Ratatosk]

Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're livin'
You are the Captain, not just a sailor
You're the best at being your own jailor

Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're livin'
The cloth of reality is yours to tailor
You're the best at being your own jailor

Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're livin'
You choose if you act like the White Whaler
You're the best at being your own jailor

[LMNO]

Hmmm.....


Thanks, Rat.  Some ideas there.