PD: The Movie: First Draft completed!

[Cramulus]

 



Dingo, that was a work of art!

you have outdone yourself yet again.

[Dysfunctional Cunt]

I'm still reading and wondering if I reappear at the last possible minute 

At least you are in it to begin with 

[Placid Dingo]

I'm still reading and wondering if I reappear at the last possible minute 

At least you are in it to begin with 

Hey Kiaransalee, sorry about that; I wasn't comfortable putting in people who didn't volunteer or whose names weren't volunteered to me.

This part of the process is about developing the quality of the work further with any needed rewrites, so let me know if you see a spot in the script that you fit into (or even just let me know how i can fit your own interpretation of Discordia in).

Also, if I can't secure final permission from anyone I will need to replace them with another figure so I'll keep your name in mind.

I really do want and value the feedback of everyone here so let me know your thoughts on the script. I know, despite genuine efforts, the female characters aren't done terribly well (I think i even fail the  Beschel test )

Of course I'm a little genderblind so I do apologise if you're a gentleman.

[Pope Pixie Pickle]

i want a kickass escape!

im short and scary, yanno.

[Placid Dingo]

Hoorah for the short people!

I did consider giving your character a reprive after 'Adriana' became 'Pixie' but I felt it would cheapen elements.

I think I'll work on edits next month.