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Started by P3nT4gR4m, July 20, 2007, 02:28:15 PM

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P3nT4gR4m

July 20, 2007, 02:28:15 PM
Legalise the devil's in the details
Whereupon ambition turns to dust
Once upon a time I had ambitions of my own
For how long before my flesh and bone should rust?

Spin the wheel and watch another sunrise
The attic of my mind required a clean
Silhouettes and shadows waged a war upon the senses
wrote epitaphs for all my hopes and dreams

With all the certainty that I can muster
I'm surrounded by the sleeping and the damned
I tried to wake them up or offer them redemption
but they're too jaded or confused to understand

To all intent and purpose I keep silence
Muffled by a veil of ignorance
Forsaking undertakings to stir up and awaken
I laughed so hard I almost shit my pants

I'm up to my arse in Brexit Numpties, but I want more.  Target-rich environments are the new sexy.
Not actually a meat product.
Ass-Kicking & Foot-Stomping Ancient Master of SHIT FUCK FUCK FUCK
Awful and Bent Behemothic Results of Last Night's Painful Squat.
High Altitude Haggis-Filled Sex Bucket From Beyond Time and Space.
Internet Monkey Person of Filthy and Immoral Pygmy-Porn Wart Contagion
Octomom Auxillary Heat Exchanger Repairman
walking the fine line line between genius and batshit fucking crazy

"computation is a pattern in the spacetime arrangement of particles, and it's not the particles but the pattern that really matters! Matter doesn't matter." -- Max Tegmark

Darth Cupcake

#1
July 20, 2007, 02:42:25 PM
 :lulz:

That last line is so solid.
Be the trouble you want to see in the world.

Triple Zero

#2
July 20, 2007, 04:00:43 PM
that was pretty good!
Ex-Soviet Bloc Sexual Attack Swede of Tomorrow™
e-prime disclaimer: let it seem fairly unclear I understand the apparent subjectivity of the above statements. maybe.

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Kaienne

#3
July 20, 2007, 04:13:09 PM
Quote from: Darth Cupcake on July 20, 2007, 02:42:25 PM
:lulz:

That last line is so solid.

Agreed.
In a constant state of losing The Game.

Cramulus

#4
July 23, 2007, 08:14:28 PM
I like it. The meter could use some tightening, it sounds a bit weird to me when I read it out loud. But the final stanza is bangin'.
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