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October 13, 2008, 09:00:02 PM
i had the american dream last night
lots of apple pies and cherry colas
there were smells of cedar
and sounds of songbirds
there was the sweet taste of freedom
and the lingering aura of safety
and then i was awaken by a feeling of dampness
fucking box is leaking again

Elder Iptuous

#1
October 13, 2008, 09:04:17 PM
I like it. nice 
but the last line... box? i missed it.

the dreadful hours

#2
October 13, 2008, 09:06:08 PM
titles are key sometimes

Kai

#3
October 13, 2008, 09:08:03 PM
Quote from: the dreadful hours on October 13, 2008, 09:00:02 PM
i had the american dream last night
lots of apple pies and cherry colas
there were smells of cedar
and sounds of songbirds
there was the sweet taste of freedom
and the lingering aura of safety
and then i was awaken by a feeling of dampness
fucking box is leaking again

I liked it.

Not really that original though.
If there is magic on this planet, it is contained in water. --Loren Eisley, The Immense Journey

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the dreadful hours

#4
October 13, 2008, 09:09:12 PM
that's what my girlfriend tells me every night
i need a new girl i think

Payne

#5
October 13, 2008, 09:12:45 PM
Or a new box.

the dreadful hours

#6
October 13, 2008, 09:13:41 PM
furniture companies are cutting back these days

AFK

#7
October 13, 2008, 09:15:58 PM
Quote from: Kai on October 13, 2008, 09:08:03 PM
Quote from: the dreadful hours on October 13, 2008, 09:00:02 PM
i had the american dream last night
lots of apple pies and cherry colas
there were smells of cedar
and sounds of songbirds
there was the sweet taste of freedom
and the lingering aura of safety
and then i was awaken by a feeling of dampness
fucking box is leaking again

I liked it.

Not really that original though.

I agree.  I think someone has been listening to a little too much Avenged Sevenfold. 
Cynicism is a blank check for failure.

the dreadful hours

#8
December 04, 2008, 04:56:59 PM
Quote from: Kai on October 13, 2008, 09:08:03 PM
Quote from: the dreadful hours on October 13, 2008, 09:00:02 PM
i had the american dream last night
lots of apple pies and cherry colas
there were smells of cedar
and sounds of songbirds
there was the sweet taste of freedom
and the lingering aura of safety
and then i was awaken by a feeling of dampness
fucking box is leaking again

I liked it.

Not really that original though.

that's what my girl says every night

Cramulus

#9
December 04, 2008, 05:02:47 PM
Quote from: the dreadful hours on October 13, 2008, 09:00:02 PM
i had the american dream last night
lots of apple pies and cherry colas
there were smells of cedar
and sounds of songbirds
there was the sweet taste of freedom
and the lingering aura of safety
and then i was awaken by a feeling of dampness
fucking box is leaking again

:mittens:

the dreadful hours

#10
December 08, 2008, 09:19:31 PM
its funny because it smells

the dreadful hours

#11
April 08, 2011, 12:28:42 PM
no need to be sour
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