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Started by Placid Dingo, September 16, 2012, 03:22:44 PM

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Mesozoic Mister Nigel

Fucking excellent!

Would you mind adding more line breaks in upcoming installments? Makes it easier to parse, especially for these aging eyes.
"I'm guessing it was January 2007, a meeting in Bethesda, we got a bag of bees and just started smashing them on the desk," Charles Wick said. "It was very complicated."


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Kai

I don't quite understand. Eating his own heart reanimated his corpse?
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Placid Dingo

Quote from: ZL 'Kai' Burington, M.S. on September 20, 2012, 01:33:43 PM
I don't quite understand. Eating his own heart reanimated his corpse?

That's not meant to be the implication. At this point it shouldn't be clear what's going on exactly with Clay, but it's going to tie in with his personal backstory. I was going to put in another sequence following Arvin's plotline and then another with Katy to try to throw in a quick info-dump about the reasons for the reanimation, etc.
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Dude, that was that stuff right there! The kind of stuff you can't get off the shelf.
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Kai

Quote from: Placid Dingo on September 20, 2012, 02:04:21 PM
Quote from: ZL 'Kai' Burington, M.S. on September 20, 2012, 01:33:43 PM
I don't quite understand. Eating his own heart reanimated his corpse?

That's not meant to be the implication. At this point it shouldn't be clear what's going on exactly with Clay, but it's going to tie in with his personal backstory. I was going to put in another sequence following Arvin's plotline and then another with Katy to try to throw in a quick info-dump about the reasons for the reanimation, etc.

Ah. I'm going to quit asking questions and just read these updates. You're good at this.
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Placid Dingo

Quote from: ZL 'Kai' Burington, M.S. on September 21, 2012, 02:08:04 AM
Quote from: Placid Dingo on September 20, 2012, 02:04:21 PM
Quote from: ZL 'Kai' Burington, M.S. on September 20, 2012, 01:33:43 PM
I don't quite understand. Eating his own heart reanimated his corpse?

That's not meant to be the implication. At this point it shouldn't be clear what's going on exactly with Clay, but it's going to tie in with his personal backstory. I was going to put in another sequence following Arvin's plotline and then another with Katy to try to throw in a quick info-dump about the reasons for the reanimation, etc.

Ah. I'm going to quit asking questions and just read these updates. You're good at this.

Youre welcome to ask away as you wish. If something's not meant to be clear yet I'll just say so
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Placid Dingo

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#25
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Kai

That was well worth the wait. Please let there be more soon.
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Mesozoic Mister Nigel

What Kai said. This story is great!
"I'm guessing it was January 2007, a meeting in Bethesda, we got a bag of bees and just started smashing them on the desk," Charles Wick said. "It was very complicated."


Placid Dingo

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Mesozoic Mister Nigel

I really like your character development. Excellent writing!
"I'm guessing it was January 2007, a meeting in Bethesda, we got a bag of bees and just started smashing them on the desk," Charles Wick said. "It was very complicated."