Whoa To The Chaos

[The Good Reverend Roger]

I think you missed the point. The reason for the double space is so that it clearly transcribes each line I'm trying to convey. Secondly, I slammed this out in a couple minutes being that that was the point. Randomness. Chaos. Fifthly, thanks for reading.

Bad poetry is no substitute for chaos.  Neither is "randomness". 

And while bad poetry is a legitimate art form (see: Joyce Kilmer), it is something that should be done in the privacy of your own home.  And then you should wash your hands.

[Salty]

OK, I have a couple of things to say about this.

Because I'm bored and cranky.

First, what is up with the double spacing?

The shit is that, other than a pretentious device

to distract the reader from the content?

I mean, at least it's not centered,

but I have the feeling that the only reason it isn't

is because you didn't think of it.

Second, are you saying

that you slammed this out in a couple of minutes

with no meaning or sense of purpose

and then you posted it here?

Why? As a deliberate attempt

to insult the reader and waste her time?

Or did you have some other motivation,

or perhaps simply not think about it at all?

I tend to be a big advocate of thinking.

It's good for you, if for no other reason

than it gives you an edge

over all the other shrieking monkeys.

I think you missed the point. The reason for the double space is so that it clearly transcribes each line I'm trying to convey. Secondly, I slammed this out in a couple minutes being that that was the point. Randomness. Chaos. Fifthly, thanks for reading.

Yeah there's a bit of that going around.

[Mesozoic Mister Nigel]

OK, I have a couple of things to say about this.

Because I'm bored and cranky.

First, what is up with the double spacing?

The shit is that, other than a pretentious device

to distract the reader from the content?

I mean, at least it's not centered,

but I have the feeling that the only reason it isn't

is because you didn't think of it.

Second, are you saying

that you slammed this out in a couple of minutes

with no meaning or sense of purpose

and then you posted it here?

Why? As a deliberate attempt

to insult the reader and waste her time?

Or did you have some other motivation,

or perhaps simply not think about it at all?

I tend to be a big advocate of thinking.

It's good for you, if for no other reason

than it gives you an edge

over all the other shrieking monkeys.

I think you missed the point. The reason for the double space is so that it clearly transcribes each line I'm trying to convey. Secondly, I slammed this out in a couple minutes being that that was the point. Randomness. Chaos. Fifthly, thanks for reading.

Wow! How RaNDoM!!!

Being random is cool

It's like, all chaotic and stuff.

http://ohinternet.com/I%27m_so_random

[Epimetheus]

But I find that I am not in fact Kathy Ireland, I am a grumpy middle aged fuck in an ancient office in a cranky fucking refinery, and I lack her amazing boobs & ass.

Is that you or is that a list of phenomena you experience?

Yeah. i'm ready to go full buddhist mode right now.

[Epimetheus]

I slammed this out in a couple minutes being that that was the point. Randomness. Chaos.

Giving the benefit of the doubt here, which I (perhaps too) often do, I'm going to posit that he means that a quick, loose, nearly stream-of-consciousness structure and process shaped the poem, with which he wanted to incite a similar feeling of quick, loose, chaotic flow.

That said, I didn't personally like the poem much. It seems to have four messages, but it moves through each so briefly that it lacks a real thrust. But you said that's what you were going for. So I guess I'll stick with "I didn't like it." I wonder if you'll say you were going for that, too.

[AFK]

I liked it.  Keep on keepin on man.

[travisoftheorderofbluster]

don't drop the chicken.....

[Freeky]

don't drop the chicken.....

Hallo, new person!

[Mesozoic Mister Nigel]

don't drop the chicken.....

At least not until you're done fucking it.

[Anna Mae Bollocks]

don't drop the chicken.....

At least not until you're done fucking it.

Ah. Now it makes sense. 

[Maddroxide]

Dont forget to pass the chicken when your done with it. Everyone wants a turn...