*cough*

[faust]

www.principiadiscordia.com

might need to hit refresh.

This is crams edition of the black iron prison and still needs tweeking as well as a table of contents made but otherwise its up.

please point out all the stuff thats wrong with it and I will work on fixing it as fast as possible

[Cramulus]

first off,



second,

Page 16 - "and it is increasing rapidly" is too high. It should be the last line of the page.
Page 17 - background image is tiled but it should be centered or stretched or something.
general - in a few places, the words run right up against the margin. I think it would look better with a half inch of white space.

all in all, great work!

[Cain]

Swote.

A related matter, but my comments at the side of the links were meant for the people looking at them here.  They look a little...out of place, on the page like that.  Just a minor quibble, but it seems a little jarring.

[faust]

what do you mean cain I dont follw.

page 16 and 17 edited.

[B_M_W]

This is awesome. Thanks Faust, for getting this front page up and running.

[faust]

I was just pointing out the link on it.

[Cain]

what do you mean cain I dont follw.

page 16 and 17 edited.

Sorry, I'm a little over the place right now.  I meant this page http://www.principiadiscordia.com/links.php since we were on main site issues.  I reckon the site names alone should be enough.

[faust]

oh ok, lol. will remove.

[faust]

I did say hit refresh right, just making it clear there is now a bip link the front page nav bar

[Triple Zero]

yeah i see it. great work!

first thing i can point out that's wrong is that the other links at the frontpage have a slight blurred drop-shadow to them, while the new BIP link doesn't have that.

it's a real tiny detail feel free to ignore it but you asked for critique

[Cramulus]

By the way,

when I was designing the new BIP booklet, the front cover was the last thing I did. I really liked the old art that we had on the cover, and I would vote for having that instead of the eye-and-pyramid that we have on the BIP website (which I think is cool too). How do you guys feel about that graphic?

[faust]

yeah, I had to manually chop up that image, it was hard enough to do without the shadow.
I will probably make the table of contents for it tomorrow or something.

[faust]

By the way,

when I was designing the new BIP booklet, the front cover was the last thing I did. I really liked the old art that we had on the cover, and I would vote for having that instead of the eye-and-pyramid that we have on the BIP website (which I think is cool too). How do you guys feel about that graphic?

I really like the eye but I can change it if people like.

[Cramulus]

small note:

the front page makes reference to the principiadiscordia.com store. Since it's gone, that text should probably be deleted.

also:
Could we use a different font for text? Anything but Arial or Times New Roman. IMHO the only thing worse than those two is comic sans.

[faust]

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