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A parody of othello where everyone is toast.

Started by cris, April 04, 2012, 11:03:44 PM

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cris

In case any of you might not know, im a highschool freshman. For an english project, I had to write a parody of othello. I didnt know what to do so I replaced all the characters with toast, and I made an entire comic out of it.
I want you guys to critique it in the worst way possible.































Im still not done with it, its due tomorrow...

Freeky


Cain


cris

Quote from: Cain on April 04, 2012, 11:22:24 PM
Othello is the most burnt piece of toast?



He is the pumpernickel because he is black, yes.

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Salty

#6
Fucking awesome, that's what.

Could you do Titus Andronicus as burritos? I'd pay for that.
The world is a car and you're the crash test dummy.

Oysters Rockefeller

I wish I could critique this (in the worst way), but it's too amazing.


Also, I agree with Alty.
Well, my gynecologist committed suicide...
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I'm nothing if not kind of ridiculous and a little hard to take seriously.
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Moar liek Oysters Cockefeller, amirite?!

Freeky

Don't leave us hanging, cris!  Some of us have never seen or read Othello!


cris


Salty

Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.
The world is a car and you're the crash test dummy.

Freeky

Quote from: Alty on April 06, 2012, 03:31:07 AM
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

My favorite panel is "It was COMMANDER SUNBEAM."

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cris

Quote from: Alty on April 06, 2012, 03:31:07 AM
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

Okay, I expect to get it back in about a week, I shall post the rest of it later