Of Blind Men and Hermits, or Psychedelic Disenchantment

[Iron Sulfide]

what good are these visions
to men that are blind?
drinking their wine, biding
bide...

we should chide them,
these men.

fuck their blindness.

what happens to the sage
revisitting the people
that he left
to correct
to find they love their ills and ails?

we should scold him
wise ass...

fuck his compassion.

hell is up,
and heaven is down?
fuck you, too!
just turn it around

you're the same thing, shit face.

you will find it true
in every form you choose
even the haiku

inversion isn't subversion
it's just clever marketing

[LHX]

intense

big fan of the fire




even tho i am not really angry
im gonna have to figure that one out



anyway
i fully endorse the above post

[East Coast Hustle]

hells yeah.

y'all know how I usually feel about poetry, but that shit was pretty dope.

[Felix]

Wasn't so much poetry, more of a rhythmically inclined verbological assfuck.

10.0/10.0

[maphdet]

what good are these visions
to men that are blind?
drinking their wine, biding
bide...

we should chide them,
these men.

fuck their blindness.

what happens to the sage
revisitting the people
that he left
to correct
to find they love their ills and ails?

we should scold him
wise ass...

fuck his compassion.

hell is up,
and heaven is down?
fuck you, too!
just turn it around

you're the same thing, shit face.

you will find it true
in every form you choose
even the haiku

inversion isn't subversion
it's just clever marketing

That the most enojyable post I have read tonight.
I actually read it a few times.
Thanks.

[LMNO]

what happens to the sage
revisitting the people
that he left
to correct
to find they love their ills and ails?

That's my favorite.