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Started by Cain, November 17, 2006, 01:12:11 AM

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November 17, 2006, 01:12:11 AM Last Edit: November 21, 2006, 08:03:27 PM by Cain
Temporarily removed in order to improve it.

Cain,
annoying perfectionist

Thurnez Isa

#1
November 17, 2006, 01:23:50 AM
I must say I realy like this one
Through me the way to the city of woe, Through me the way to everlasting pain, Through me the way among the lost.
Justice moved my maker on high.
Divine power made me, Wisdom supreme, and Primal love.
Before me nothing was but things eternal, and eternal I endure.
Abandon all hope, you who enter here.
Dante

Cain

#2
November 17, 2006, 01:29:42 AM
Thanks.  I'm messing around with a new form of writing (for me, anyway) where there is just small "snapshots" like this.  No real plot or story, start or end or character development or moral, just a small segment of...something.

I have a couple of slightly longer pieces (one semi-factual) but they need polishing before release.

Jasper

#3
November 17, 2006, 06:27:42 AM
Gives a strong sense of urgency and intrigue.  Also like the concept a lot, being a fan of brevity.

P3nT4gR4m

#4
November 17, 2006, 08:15:02 AM
I feel the urge to leave this message on random answering machines

I'm up to my arse in Brexit Numpties, but I want more.  Target-rich environments are the new sexy.
Not actually a meat product.
Ass-Kicking & Foot-Stomping Ancient Master of SHIT FUCK FUCK FUCK
Awful and Bent Behemothic Results of Last Night's Painful Squat.
High Altitude Haggis-Filled Sex Bucket From Beyond Time and Space.
Internet Monkey Person of Filthy and Immoral Pygmy-Porn Wart Contagion
Octomom Auxillary Heat Exchanger Repairman
walking the fine line line between genius and batshit fucking crazy

"computation is a pattern in the spacetime arrangement of particles, and it's not the particles but the pattern that really matters! Matter doesn't matter." -- Max Tegmark

Triple Zero

#5
November 17, 2006, 01:40:25 PM
yea that was my first impression as well :) mindfuck possibilities :)

about brevity, kind of like a haiku no? is also supposed to be a snapshot of a moment.
Ex-Soviet Bloc Sexual Attack Swede of Tomorrow™
e-prime disclaimer: let it seem fairly unclear I understand the apparent subjectivity of the above statements. maybe.

INFORMATION SO POWERFUL, YOU ACTUALLY NEED LESS.

P3nT4gR4m

#6
November 17, 2006, 02:10:59 PM
Quote from: triple zero on November 17, 2006, 01:40:25 PM
yea that was my first impression as well :) mindfuck possibilities :)

about brevity, kind of like a haiku no? is also supposed to be a snapshot of a moment.

Seed of now
planted in mind
forever

I'm up to my arse in Brexit Numpties, but I want more.  Target-rich environments are the new sexy.
Not actually a meat product.
Ass-Kicking & Foot-Stomping Ancient Master of SHIT FUCK FUCK FUCK
Awful and Bent Behemothic Results of Last Night's Painful Squat.
High Altitude Haggis-Filled Sex Bucket From Beyond Time and Space.
Internet Monkey Person of Filthy and Immoral Pygmy-Porn Wart Contagion
Octomom Auxillary Heat Exchanger Repairman
walking the fine line line between genius and batshit fucking crazy

"computation is a pattern in the spacetime arrangement of particles, and it's not the particles but the pattern that really matters! Matter doesn't matter." -- Max Tegmark

Lies

#7
March 31, 2007, 05:32:34 PM
What on earth was this anyway?
I really wanna know.
- So the New World Order does not actually exist?
- Oh it exists, and how!
Ask the slaves whose labour built the White House;
Ask the slaves of today tied down to sweatshops and brothels to escape hunger;
Ask most women, second class citizens, in a pervasive rape culture;
Ask the non-human creatures who inhabit the planet:
whales, bears, frogs, tuna, bees, slaughtered farm animals;
Ask the natives of the Americas and Australia on whose land
you live today, on whose graves your factories, farms and neighbourhoods stand;
ask any of them this, ask them if the New World Order is true;
they'll tell you plainly: the New World Order... is you!

Cain

#8
March 31, 2007, 06:02:54 PM
Oh, whoops, forgot about that.  I'll post it back up when I get back to my proper PC.  Its not on this hard drive.

Thurnez Isa

#9
July 06, 2008, 05:01:22 PM
Cain you ever improved this
i liked this one
Through me the way to the city of woe, Through me the way to everlasting pain, Through me the way among the lost.
Justice moved my maker on high.
Divine power made me, Wisdom supreme, and Primal love.
Before me nothing was but things eternal, and eternal I endure.
Abandon all hope, you who enter here.
Dante
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