Agree with nigel. Good posters! less exclamation points. Less hyperbole.
Anti-Swiss posterA government issued poster would never refer to something as "up to no good" or "evil" ("axis of evil" nonwithstanding). Use the same fnord-words that you'd see if it was in the paper or evening news. Instead of "Evils of Neutrality" maybe allude to a Sin of Omission.
riffing on the Good Samaritan law might be funny too. Like that these neutral countries are complicit in evil because they're not trying to stop it.
It's a funny poster - obviously a joke with the "swiss cheese punchline". If you were to create a more straightfaced version of this gag, I'd strip out the punchlines
Don't Be Afraid!Like Nigel, this is my favorite of the two. It might strenghten it to draw a contrast between the "dangerous" terrorists and the "friendly" authorities.
Both posters could use some images. Official looking iconography is always a good bet to make a poster look official. Throw a letterhead on there, and/or an official town seal. I'm a fan of
says-it to generate seals.
and many, many posters will stay up longer if you include this mystic glyph:
AUTHORIZED FOR PUBLIC POSTING, CODE 00523E.
OFFICE OF THE TILER"Tiler", by the way, is a masonic title. If the cops are illuminati as well, this might send them directly to mindfucked.
