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Don't get me wrong, I greatly appreciate the fact that you're at least putting effort into sincerely arguing your points. It's an argument I've enjoyed having. It's just that your points are wrong and your reasons for thinking they're right are stupid.

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Pamphlet Draft

Started by Cramulus, March 01, 2007, 05:30:58 PM

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Cramulus

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November 29, 2010, 03:19:15 AM
bump because I had completely forgotten about this

Golden Applesauce

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December 02, 2010, 07:46:19 PM
Quote from: Cramulus on March 01, 2007, 08:34:38 PM
Good call, Rev.

Regarding the notion that it's too preachy / evangelical -- can you guys point out some places where you think it needs some cleanup?

The bits where you're saying how the other person's life might possibly be miserable - true, but the other pamphlets that start that way have a tendency to end with "and for the low price of 19.95, you can have Jesus in your life!  It worked for me!"  Maybe clarify earlier that you don't have the answers either?  I dunno.
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