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Started by cyberus, April 27, 2007, 08:44:31 AM

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cyberus

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Ok, so, they're not really my rhymes, it's a Dead Kennedy's cover.  I did do the beats though.  Fruityloops in case you're wondering.  I've been meaning to either cover some more punk stuff, or start working on my own rhymes, but apathy got ahold of me.  Plus, I can never make any beats I actually like.  Just thought I'd throw it up here for some feedback.
The bun-sellers or cake-makers were in nothing inclinable to their request; but,which was worse,did injure them most outrageously,called them prattling gabblers,lickorous gluttons,freckled bittors,mangy rascals,shite-a-bed scoundrels,drunken roysters,sly knaves,drowsy loiterers,slapsauce fellows,slabberdegullion druggels,lubberly louts,cozening foxes,ruffian rogues,paltry customers,sycophant-varlets,drawlatch hoydens,flouting milksops,jeering companions,staring clowns,forlorn snakes,ninny lobcocks,scurvy sneaksbies,fondling fops,base loons,saucy coxcombs,idle lusks,scoffing braggarts,noddy meacocks,blockish grutnols,doddipol-joltheads,jobbernol goosecaps,foolish loggerheads,flutch calf-lollies,grouthead gnat-snappers,lob-dotterels,gaping changelings,codshead loobies,woodcock slangams,ninny-hammer flycatchers,noddypeak simpletons,turdy gut,shitten shepherds,and other suchlike defamatory epithets; saying further,that it was not for them to eat of these dainty cakes...

LHX

i will check this in a minute
neat hell

LHX

youre almost on to something with the beats

i can tell that there is some effort there but its missing some element

maybe some soul


stick wiff it
neat hell

cyberus

Thanks, LHX.  It started out as something fun to do, and I never really planned to continue it.
(not that I've done anything recently)

But when it was finished, I got that same feeling, it was Almost something.  I want to do more, but I feel like a monkey who got lucky with a typewriter, it seems like anything I do now just sounds awful.

I keep trying.

Thanks for the feedback.
The bun-sellers or cake-makers were in nothing inclinable to their request; but,which was worse,did injure them most outrageously,called them prattling gabblers,lickorous gluttons,freckled bittors,mangy rascals,shite-a-bed scoundrels,drunken roysters,sly knaves,drowsy loiterers,slapsauce fellows,slabberdegullion druggels,lubberly louts,cozening foxes,ruffian rogues,paltry customers,sycophant-varlets,drawlatch hoydens,flouting milksops,jeering companions,staring clowns,forlorn snakes,ninny lobcocks,scurvy sneaksbies,fondling fops,base loons,saucy coxcombs,idle lusks,scoffing braggarts,noddy meacocks,blockish grutnols,doddipol-joltheads,jobbernol goosecaps,foolish loggerheads,flutch calf-lollies,grouthead gnat-snappers,lob-dotterels,gaping changelings,codshead loobies,woodcock slangams,ninny-hammer flycatchers,noddypeak simpletons,turdy gut,shitten shepherds,and other suchlike defamatory epithets; saying further,that it was not for them to eat of these dainty cakes...

P3nT4gR4m

Quote from: cyberus on April 28, 2007, 02:59:30 AM

But when it was finished, I got that same feeling, it was Almost something.  I want to do more, but I feel like a monkey who got lucky with a typewriter, it seems like anything I do now just sounds awful.


:lulz: Sounds like you're the same kinda musician as me

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Some suggestions:

Replace the 909 kicks/crashes/toms/everything with the 808 equivalents thereof. You'll get a way more electronic, tinny sound that won't sound like you're faking organic sounds. (If that didn't make any sense, I'm referencing the fact that you're current drum sounds sound like they were sampled from a Roland TR909 drum machine, and I suggest using samples of a Roland TR808 drum machine instead. If you don't have samples of either, PM me and I'll send you mine.)

Needs a synth, if only to play the occasional note (with lots of reverb thrown on for good measure.) I suggest using some Moog or Arppe samples to get that analog goodness.
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Triple Zero

for a kickass 808 and 909 synthesizer/emulator, get Rebirth. i think it's free. and otherwise it's on torrent.

it also features a 303 (acid bassline 18db lowpass resonance filtered square waves FOR THE MOTHERFUCKIN WIN)

only downside to it is that it also emulates the interface of those synths :) which is not too bad with the 808 and 909, but for the 303 it can be hell :) but it'll give you that authentic feel, you know :-P
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LMNO

It looks like ReBirth is only available for OS9.  Do you know if it works on OSX?

Triple Zero

i only used it under windows, myself.

but afaik, OSX can run OS9 programs or not? only with reduced performance or something.
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Not always.  Some older versions have a "classic" function that runs OS9.  Mine is not one of those.


I used to have Reason.  It was awesome.  I wish I could afford a new copy.

cyberus

Quote from: triple zero on May 03, 2007, 01:20:27 PM
for a kickass 808 and 909 synthesizer/emulator, get Rebirth. i think it's free. and otherwise it's on torrent.

it also features a 303 (acid bassline 18db lowpass resonance filtered square waves FOR THE MOTHERFUCKIN WIN)

only downside to it is that it also emulates the interface of those synths :) which is not too bad with the 808 and 909, but for the 303 it can be hell :) but it'll give you that authentic feel, you know :-P

I used to have rebirth, and yes, that's what pissed me off about it.  I don't have any noise apps installed atm, and considering I have 478mb of free space on my HD, I won't for awhile.

Quote from: LMNO on May 03, 2007, 02:16:19 PMI used to have Reason.  It was awesome.  I wish I could afford a new copy.

I've seen it on some torrent sites.  I d/led it awhile ago, but never got around to installing it.  Probably gone now.  Everything is, and I still have no disk space.
The bun-sellers or cake-makers were in nothing inclinable to their request; but,which was worse,did injure them most outrageously,called them prattling gabblers,lickorous gluttons,freckled bittors,mangy rascals,shite-a-bed scoundrels,drunken roysters,sly knaves,drowsy loiterers,slapsauce fellows,slabberdegullion druggels,lubberly louts,cozening foxes,ruffian rogues,paltry customers,sycophant-varlets,drawlatch hoydens,flouting milksops,jeering companions,staring clowns,forlorn snakes,ninny lobcocks,scurvy sneaksbies,fondling fops,base loons,saucy coxcombs,idle lusks,scoffing braggarts,noddy meacocks,blockish grutnols,doddipol-joltheads,jobbernol goosecaps,foolish loggerheads,flutch calf-lollies,grouthead gnat-snappers,lob-dotterels,gaping changelings,codshead loobies,woodcock slangams,ninny-hammer flycatchers,noddypeak simpletons,turdy gut,shitten shepherds,and other suchlike defamatory epithets; saying further,that it was not for them to eat of these dainty cakes...

The Littlest Ubermensch

Quote from: triple zero on May 03, 2007, 01:20:27 PM
it also features a 303 (acid bassline 18db lowpass resonance filtered square waves FOR THE MOTHERFUCKIN WIN)

acid lead 24db lowpass resonance filtered extremely distorted saw waves with extremely fast cutoff modulation for REAL ULTIMATE POWER! (extra points for distorted 909 kick.)

Quote from: triple zero on May 03, 2007, 01:20:27 PM
only downside to it is that it also emulates the interface of those synths :) which is not too bad with the 808 and 909, but for the 303 it can be hell :) but it'll give you that authentic feel, you know :-P

Needs an instruction manual entirely in Japanese for real authenticity.   :D
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Triple Zero

sorry but the 18db authentic 303 filter pwns the sound of the newer 24db filters, imo. you can hear the difference, it's not the same. the 24db has a steeper cutoff, more sharp resonance, so the resonant frequency becomes a "tune" of some sort by itself.
it's the fact that you can hear those two "tunes" simulaneously, that draws me to acid.

we're never going to agree on electronic music, are we ;-)
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Quote from: triple zero on May 03, 2007, 11:18:33 PM
sorry but the 18db authentic 303 filter pwns the sound of the newer 24db filters, imo. you can hear the difference, it's not the same. the 24db has a steeper cutoff, more sharp resonance, so the resonant frequency becomes a "tune" of some sort by itself.
it's the fact that you can hear those two "tunes" simulaneously, that draws me to acid.

we're never going to agree on electronic music, are we ;-)

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(I do love the original, fat, warm 303 sounds, but it's the modded/emulated ones that are always cooler to me. Maybe it's that I wasn't around for the days of analog circuitry...ya geezer  :wink:)
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i wasn't there either (i'm 26), but i try to know my classics :)

also i tried building a software 303 emulator/synth once. it was fun. it was also not part of the assignment i was supposed to do, so i didn't finish it :) so i kinda have a soft spot for it's "tweaks" :)

there was a great website that told the "303 secrets" which i consulted a lot. that, and spectral analysis of Rebirth samples. with the resonance turned up you can easily see the shape of the filter envelopes.

bonus track
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