Pools are overated, especially ones on roofs with no water!

yeah I agree with the fact the the BIP does seem a little dark... but it suits the metaphor, just the "joke" isnt as obvious... some sad sods may take it at face value, so throwing some GSP would make it nice and ambiguous, withought losing the common thread... just a thought
shit these forums fuck with my head!!!!! not used to them hahahahahhaha