That's a really strong piece, Vex...
updates--
So far, Volume Dingus is doing really well. I've put them up in "high risk" spots - meaning that they're in spots where these things usually get torn down within hours. Nevertheless, most posters have remained up for three or four days.
We've observed two people reading the posters to whomever they are on the cell phone with, visibly laughing. That really made my day.