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Started by Epimetheus, February 13, 2008, 05:00:03 AM

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February 15, 2008, 01:18:07 AM
Quote from: Professor Cramulus on February 13, 2008, 08:14:41 PM
Quote from: Epimetheus on February 13, 2008, 06:00:32 PM
Quote from: Nigel on February 13, 2008, 05:54:50 PM
Quote from: Epimetheus on February 13, 2008, 05:51:41 PM
Very true, I guess I meant the day when the parents start teaching the child; words and morals and stuff.

Epimetheus, it seems to me that you yourself may not be very clear on the concept you are trying to convey; I would recommend that you start with that, and rework the essay when you're more sure of what you want it to mean.

Well, it was a spur-of-the-moment thing, and however nonsensical my rants may be I like to leave them that way for whatever sense of preservation I like to have. Of course, I will modify it before actually using it on peoples.


Don't get discouraged. You seem to have strong writing skills and I'm betting you can come up with some gems. Remember that you'll write a dozen pieces before you strike gold, and all this discussion and workshopping is part of the process.

don't stop a-rockin'.


No, no, I know. I appreciate all the concrit.
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February 15, 2008, 01:20:28 AM
Quote from: Bharlion on February 14, 2008, 12:03:01 AM
That was gold! You made that up or did you find it.

Made it, thanks.
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