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Started by Daruko, July 29, 2008, 08:15:42 PM

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July 29, 2008, 08:15:42 PM Last Edit: July 29, 2008, 08:17:43 PM by Daruko
I move expeditiously forward,
belligerent toward sustained contention.
Self-sustained predisposition;
a quandary perhaps.

Shall I question retrogression?
No time for that! 
The Beast cometh.

This is it. 
My blood coagulates.
Olfactory emotions react
to the putrid smell of regret.

Must I must? 
Struggle or capitulate?
Abscond!  Absquatulate!

Ah! Sweet wisteria.
A confidant emerges.
As I sway, I spot the fray;
The Beast eyes me ostensibly.

I must not relent,
but then...
Swift descent.
Disquieting pleasure.

A skid, a slump,
and the final bump,
Respiration ceases.
But what is this?
A sweet aroma?
A magnificent orchestration of the senses.
The orchid glimmers.

Bebek Sincap Ratatosk

#1
July 29, 2008, 09:36:04 PM
I like it.
- I don't see race. I just see cars going around in a circle.

"Back in my day, crazy meant something. Now everyone is crazy" - Charlie Manson

Daruko

#2
July 29, 2008, 10:49:34 PM

Messier Undertree

#3
July 30, 2008, 03:17:43 AM
Quixotic, dramatic, invigorating.

Daruko

#4
July 30, 2008, 04:56:54 AM Last Edit: July 30, 2008, 04:59:27 AM by Daruko
Quote from: Davedim on July 30, 2008, 03:17:43 AM
Quixotic, dramatic, invigorating.

why quixotic?

thanks tho

Payne

#5
July 30, 2008, 10:20:50 AM
EMOTIONAL




EROTIC




EFFERVESCENT

Messier Undertree

#6
July 31, 2008, 07:19:41 PM
POWERFUL




PRAGMATIC




PERGAMENEOUS

Cramulus

#7
July 31, 2008, 07:24:45 PM
mysterious, challenging, breathtaking

Daruko

#8
July 31, 2008, 07:45:50 PM
 :thanks:

Mesozoic Mister Nigel

#9
July 31, 2008, 08:25:25 PM
Ur a brillint poet
"I'm guessing it was January 2007, a meeting in Bethesda, we got a bag of bees and just started smashing them on the desk," Charles Wick said. "It was very complicated."

Daruko

#10
July 31, 2008, 09:10:02 PM

TheLastLump

#11
July 31, 2008, 09:18:35 PM
Like Jabberwocky, but with 20% less made-up words! Well done, Rook!
"It's a dog-eat-dog world, Jesus, please holla back..." -The Game

doughboy359: Don't be angry cause you're a heretical pagan, we'll still accept you if you convert. Doughboy, on being a Catholic.

Daruko

#12
July 31, 2008, 10:00:53 PM
Quote from: TheLastLump on July 31, 2008, 09:18:35 PM
Like Jabberwocky, but with 20% less made-up words! Well done, Rook!

davedim, cram, and payne: you r all criticizing the verbiage yes?

i realized it was verbose and perhaps a bit gaudy, but it felt like i evoked the correct imagery for the concept

it's basically a personal interpretation of an old zen koan

Triple Zero

#13
July 31, 2008, 10:41:51 PM
it's depth and clearness reminds me of a Frysian lake.
Ex-Soviet Bloc Sexual Attack Swede of Tomorrow™
e-prime disclaimer: let it seem fairly unclear I understand the apparent subjectivity of the above statements. maybe.

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Sir Squid Diddimus

#14
August 01, 2008, 05:28:43 AM
gastronomical

omophagous

insectivorous

phytophagous

masticatory.
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