A rough draft

[Honey]

I really like this!  I like the original flow of thought & then how you actually went about developing it further.

And that's what's interesting about humans.  We do fill in the blanks.  If I were to say "1, 2, 4, 5" you would ask me about the number three.  We project into the future.  "If I try x I will ________" succeed or fail, depending on personality.  That personality that is a stew of juice inside your brain.  That brain which is your own universe.  That universe of which you are creator and ruler.

You DID this ^

& created a piece where the reader could do it too!

Bravissimo!  Thanks & respect.