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« on: May 12, 2004, 08:26:00 pm »
I don´t know if this topic already exists. If you got a poem, short writing or something just post it here.
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« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2004, 08:30:13 pm »
Wish I was a poetic genious but


                       bored to death of

    reading the pages of poets
the

tears


run



down


down

down  



the page till they drop                                                     off






I'd rather be fucking
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« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2004, 08:41:10 pm »
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferis
Wish I was a poetic genious but


                       bored to death of

    reading the pages of poets
the

tears


run



down


down

down  



the page till they drop                                                     off






I'd rather be fucking


 :lol: well the way you used the page was poetic ....running down, and the pun in the end was nice too
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« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2004, 08:49:07 pm »
when i hear a girl

any girl                                                   a pretty girl

                   a fat girl with poor

                       concept of self

                                                             say


              I'm as pure as the









driven snow










                                          ( pause to think )















                                                have so seen snow thats been driven in?
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« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2004, 10:54:18 pm »
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when i hear a girl

any girl                                                   a pretty girl

                   a fat girl with poor

                       concept of self

                                                             say


              I'm as pure as the









driven snow










                                          ( pause to think )















                                                have so seen snow thats been driven in?


you¬¥re bad  :lol:
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« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2004, 10:56:51 pm »
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Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferis
when i hear a girl

any girl                                                   a pretty girl

                   a fat girl with poor

                       concept of self

                                                             say


              I'm as pure as the









driven snow










                                          ( pause to think )















                                                have so seen snow thats been driven in?


you¬¥re bad  :lol:
I'm bad.   But smile?

shakes head    confused
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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2004, 10:59:56 pm »
He smiles because he's also bad.
just like in a dream
you'll open your mouth to scream
and you won't make a sound

you can't believe your eyes
you can't believe your ears
you can't believe your friends
you can't believe you're here

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« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2004, 11:03:56 pm »
thanks for the



twice said



words



i


miss you  more




then jesus




into my heart




this great misunderstanding.
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« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2004, 11:10:42 pm »
When i saw the sunrise for a first time
it was Appolo I was looking at.
I wondered what to teach me he had
the lust of laughing, the joy of wine?

In time I learned what he was about
reason, intelligence and logic schemes
no time for childish thoughts and dreams
his expresions always firm and stout.

As I grew I admired this statue
that masculin figure
that perfect picture
of wisdom, knowledge and solemn virtue

One day I stepped into the world
and learned much about new things
about beauty, songs and feelings
so many things he hadn´t told?

The statue still stood firm and impressive
but my adoration grew lesser
as my curiousity grew stronger
the appolonian virtues in me got lassive.

I woke up realising one day
that he had thought me how to survive but not to live
except lectures in keeping your soul hidden he had nothing more to give
it was then I turned my back at him and went my way.

Appolonius my kin you still stand firm and high
but your power over me has gone
No more fake wisdom more to come
I do not know you and stopped to wonder why.
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« Reply #9 on: May 12, 2004, 11:13:54 pm »
If you're on a date
With my gate
Then don't be late
And it'll be great
On your date
With my gate

(Thank you, I'm here all week)
1. e4             e5
2. Bc4           Bc5
3. Qf3           Ne7
4. Qxf7++

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« Reply #10 on: May 12, 2004, 11:16:24 pm »
Quote from: Medeo
If you're on a date
With my gate
Then don't be late
And it'll be great
On your date
With my gate

(Thank you, I'm here all week)
are you available for weddings?
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« Reply #11 on: May 12, 2004, 11:18:31 pm »
Quote from: Medeo
(Thank you, I'm here all week)


Maybe I need a vacation.



Pay no attention to the disembodied voice. He just lacks critical mass.

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« Reply #12 on: May 12, 2004, 11:33:48 pm »
I'm hear, all weak!
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« Reply #13 on: May 12, 2004, 11:36:29 pm »
Weak
Week
Bleak
Meek
Shriek
Freak
Geek
Meek
Chic
Leek
Leak
1. e4             e5
2. Bc4           Bc5
3. Qf3           Ne7
4. Qxf7++

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« Reply #14 on: May 13, 2004, 09:52:45 am »
Quote from: Medeo
Weak
Week
Bleak
Meek
Shriek
Freak
Geek
Meek
Chic
Leek
Leak


very expressionistic
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