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Started by The Good Reverend Roger, October 10, 2009, 06:37:13 AM

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October 10, 2009, 06:37:13 AM Last Edit: October 10, 2009, 06:41:27 AM by The Good Reverend Roger










" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

The Good Reverend Roger

#1
October 10, 2009, 06:40:48 AM
That's the rough draft, of course. 

Nivek will be doing Broken Little Town in tandem with Keelin's Spider series.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Iason Ouabache

#2
October 10, 2009, 06:50:43 AM
:mittens: Are you planning on adding any color to them are leaving them as is?
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#3
October 10, 2009, 07:06:18 AM
:mittens: Perfect!

Sir Squid Diddimus

#4
October 10, 2009, 07:21:01 AM
I like them as is.

Pretty great!  :mittens:

Mesozoic Mister Nigel

#5
October 10, 2009, 08:09:22 AM
YESSSSSS
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Nast

#6
October 10, 2009, 08:30:10 AM
You guys are awesome.  :)

:mittens:
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Triple Zero

#7
October 10, 2009, 09:21:34 AM
Beautiful!
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Kai

#8
October 10, 2009, 12:51:46 PM
My god that's so awesome.
If there is magic on this planet, it is contained in water. --Loren Eisley, The Immense Journey

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Grand Visser of the Six Legged Class
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rong

#9
October 10, 2009, 02:32:37 PM
these are truly great.  i love the handwriting. 

my only critique would be that the "feeding tube" person looks a little too japanimated (sic?) - and, shall we say . . . not fat?

it looks good, but i'm not sure if it's keeping with the metaphor.

i kinda pictured the average "feeding tube person" to look more like this guy:


"a real smart feller, he felt smart"

The Good Reverend Roger

#10
October 10, 2009, 02:57:39 PM
Quote from: rong on October 10, 2009, 02:32:37 PM
these are truly great.  i love the handwriting. 

my only critique would be that the "feeding tube" person looks a little too japanimated (sic?) - and, shall we say . . . not fat?

it looks good, but i'm not sure if it's keeping with the metaphor.

i kinda pictured the average "feeding tube person" to look more like this guy:




Yeah, the handwriting was genius on Keelin's part.  And the Japanime is all she's up for, she's new at this.  Nivek's work is a lot more varied...I have the first galleys for Broken Little Town, but I need her to fix something before I post it.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Eater of Clowns

#11
October 10, 2009, 03:38:21 PM
This is wonderful.  It's like a children's book got invaded and desecrated.

As for the feeding tube person, I think it's good as it is.  The point of the web is that it gets everyone regardless of age, beauty, etc.

Plus, not every cough potato or teevee addict looks like Carl.
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rong

#12
October 10, 2009, 03:48:52 PM
Quote from: Eater of Clowns on October 10, 2009, 03:38:21 PM
Plus, not every cough potato or teevee addict looks like Carl.

point taken
"a real smart feller, he felt smart"

Suu

#13
October 10, 2009, 04:20:57 PM
Quote from: Eater of Clowns on October 10, 2009, 03:38:21 PM

Plus, not every cough potato or teevee addict looks like Carl.

They do if they're from Northern New Jersey.
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Kai

#14
October 10, 2009, 06:32:49 PM
I just gotta say, that the creepy cut off head and smile on the guy in the suit in the last panel next to the spider makes the whole damn thing. So fucking perfect.
If there is magic on this planet, it is contained in water. --Loren Eisley, The Immense Journey

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Grand Visser of the Six Legged Class
Chanticleer of the Holometabola Clade Church, Diptera Parish
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