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Started by NotPublished, December 30, 2009, 01:14:34 AM

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December 30, 2009, 01:14:34 AM
Fuck that shit.
It was an experience atleast,
The tempting eyes,
The handsome face, strong arms ..
But what does it all mean?

I was there,
Watching the rhythm of an orgy,
Skin on Skin
Chest on chest
Lips on lips.

I was tempted,
Invited many times,
I even thought of joining
Was I jealous? Was I missing out?
But I'm not a born hunter

Never before did I feel concerned,
But I realise - its the nature of Man.
But why, isn't it mine?
The idea of feeling special - lost
Amongst the bare chested Men

But thankfully, I realise
Its not what it all seems
I know me for me
What was I to expect
It was a Gay Club
In Soviet Russia, sins died for Jesus.

NotPublished

#1
December 30, 2009, 01:15:49 AM
I wrote this on the train to work today, my first attempt at writing any form of Poetry really.
In Soviet Russia, sins died for Jesus.

Storebrand

#2
December 30, 2009, 02:03:08 AM
Beyond really liking the visual the bold portion is really awesome.

Quote from: NotPublished on December 30, 2009, 01:14:34 AM
Fuck that shit.
It was an experience atleast,
The tempting eyes,
The handsome face, strong arms ..
But what does it all mean?

I was there,
Watching the rhythm of an orgy,
Skin on Skin
Chest on chest
Lips on lips.

I was tempted,
Invited many times,
I even thought of joining
Was I jealous? Was I missing out?
But I'm not a born hunter

Never before did I feel concerned,
But I realise - its the nature of Man.
But why, isn't it mine?
The idea of feeling special - lost
Amongst the bare chested Men

But thankfully, I realise
Its not what it all seems
I know me for me
What was I to expect
It was a Gay Club

NotPublished

#3
December 30, 2009, 02:31:17 AM
Aw, thank you very much :)
In Soviet Russia, sins died for Jesus.

Mesozoic Mister Nigel

#4
December 30, 2009, 06:48:36 PM
The last two lines totally made the whole thing for me.
:lulz:

Sometimes, a poem with a punch line is the best kind.
"I'm guessing it was January 2007, a meeting in Bethesda, we got a bag of bees and just started smashing them on the desk," Charles Wick said. "It was very complicated."

Bebek Sincap Ratatosk

#5
December 30, 2009, 07:52:28 PM
:mittens:
- I don't see race. I just see cars going around in a circle.

"Back in my day, crazy meant something. Now everyone is crazy" - Charlie Manson

Cramulus

#6
December 30, 2009, 07:56:55 PM
I like it, NP, nice work!

How does the first line fit into all this?

NotPublished

#7
December 30, 2009, 09:27:42 PM Last Edit: December 30, 2009, 09:34:22 PM by NotPublished
 :lulz: Thanks very much guys

@Cram - The first line, was showing my frustration

@Nigel Haha thanks I'm glad you approve :D
In Soviet Russia, sins died for Jesus.
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