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« Reply #270 on: February 16, 2012, 02:21:08 am »
Thoughts?

I can clean up the audio a bit, but it's some spoken word over rong's instrumental.

http://soundcloud.com/139thmemeticengineers/buzzing-vignette-2

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maybe i'm too picky, but i think it would be better if it was more spoken - less rhythmic.  it kinda sounds to me like you haven't decided if you intend to blend with the music or not.
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« Reply #271 on: February 16, 2012, 03:00:27 am »
Thoughts?

I can clean up the audio a bit, but it's some spoken word over rong's instrumental.

http://soundcloud.com/139thmemeticengineers/buzzing-vignette-2

Didn't get to the other stuff. Out of state visitors. Worked until 8:45 and then left work at 9:15 due to mandatory lunch break. Guinness. Scotch.

maybe i'm too picky, but i think it would be better if it was more spoken - less rhythmic.  it kinda sounds to me like you haven't decided if you intend to blend with the music or not.

That's an accurate assessment. I'll give it another shot without rhythm.
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« Reply #272 on: February 16, 2012, 03:02:57 am »
Thoughts?

I can clean up the audio a bit, but it's some spoken word over rong's instrumental.

http://soundcloud.com/139thmemeticengineers/buzzing-vignette-2

Didn't get to the other stuff. Out of state visitors. Worked until 8:45 and then left work at 9:15 due to mandatory lunch break. Guinness. Scotch.

maybe i'm too picky, but i think it would be better if it was more spoken - less rhythmic.  it kinda sounds to me like you haven't decided if you intend to blend with the music or not.

That's an accurate assessment. I'll give it another shot without rhythm.

How hard would it be to say your part and then mix in the music track so as to not get caught in the rhythm of the music while speaking?
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« Reply #273 on: February 16, 2012, 03:04:19 am »
Thoughts?

I can clean up the audio a bit, but it's some spoken word over rong's instrumental.

http://soundcloud.com/139thmemeticengineers/buzzing-vignette-2

Didn't get to the other stuff. Out of state visitors. Worked until 8:45 and then left work at 9:15 due to mandatory lunch break. Guinness. Scotch.

maybe i'm too picky, but i think it would be better if it was more spoken - less rhythmic.  it kinda sounds to me like you haven't decided if you intend to blend with the music or not.

That's an accurate assessment. I'll give it another shot without rhythm.

How hard would it be to say your part and then mix in the music track so as to not get caught in the rhythm of the music while speaking?

i think that's an excellent idea.
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« Reply #274 on: February 16, 2012, 03:08:21 am »
Thoughts?

I can clean up the audio a bit, but it's some spoken word over rong's instrumental.

http://soundcloud.com/139thmemeticengineers/buzzing-vignette-2

Didn't get to the other stuff. Out of state visitors. Worked until 8:45 and then left work at 9:15 due to mandatory lunch break. Guinness. Scotch.

maybe i'm too picky, but i think it would be better if it was more spoken - less rhythmic.  it kinda sounds to me like you haven't decided if you intend to blend with the music or not.

That's an accurate assessment. I'll give it another shot without rhythm.

How hard would it be to say your part and then mix in the music track so as to not get caught in the rhythm of the music while speaking?

That's not too much of a problem. It rhymes, so I might have to fight it a little, but I should be able to manage.

Mixing it in after the fact may be problematic (I might want to space it out the same way), but we'll see.
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« Reply #275 on: February 16, 2012, 03:10:51 am »
I wasn't able to put my finger on it til I got your guys feedback, but I think it's a little too reminiscent of a slower Marilyn Manson song vocal-wise. I tried to take advantage of my sore throat to get a sort of groggy effect, but it didn't quite hit the spot.
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« Reply #276 on: March 27, 2012, 11:07:49 pm »
<insert image of a bee here>
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« Reply #277 on: March 27, 2012, 11:11:27 pm »
After this weekend i can get back to it.
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« Reply #278 on: March 27, 2012, 11:12:28 pm »
After this weekend i can get back to it.

Woot
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« Reply #279 on: March 27, 2012, 11:19:08 pm »
Might even get to do some of it thursady night. Well see.
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« Reply #280 on: March 28, 2012, 04:39:08 pm »

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« Reply #281 on: March 28, 2012, 04:44:20 pm »
Its a bee.
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« Reply #282 on: April 04, 2012, 08:33:26 am »
If all goes well I am reclaiming my acoustic from the studio tonight. Which means I can get started again tomorrow night.
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« Reply #283 on: April 19, 2012, 11:29:49 pm »
One day I met Death in person. He was a pretty good guy actually. He told me that hes come for me plenty of times but I just recreate myself. The lesson here is simple. 42.

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« Reply #284 on: April 20, 2012, 05:41:29 am »
Ok, so we got the 139th Memetic Engineers Brigade that are the organization responsible for the CDs, hence the warning lables. Right?

Ok, so we got the DiscordiCorp, which we could use as the buffer stuff as ads for their products. Right?

Ok ok, so what if we have at the begining some kind of briefing material indicating that the rest of the CD is the results of an investigations of DiscordiCorp and its subsidiaries?
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