Herbaris Baphia (experimental/minimal/techno)

[Dalek]

I got tired of waiting for the guitarist from the other band I play for to get in the mood to record shit, so I did some recording on my own. You might not like it if you're not into minimal techno( or even if you are into minimal techno), but this here is my new project - Herberis Baphia, and this is the debut track. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=csHGKapz320

Tell me what you think about it. I'm really open to criticism, so any critique will be welcomed. In a few days I hope I'll have time to give the finishing touches to a couple of other tracks, but for now that's the only one you can listen to.

[Disco Pickle]

that tone, the repeating one?  it dominates the song and takes me out of it because I can predict it.

Maybe this was what you were going for, but it wears on my ears.

maybe mix it up, take it up an octave then down, build a longer melody.  something that lasts 8 or 16 notes and then repeats.  maybe have a variation on it that leads in, and another that runs the middle of the song, then one that leads out.

If the sound is going to dominate your song, make it the sound that tells the tale.

my 2 cents.

good work otherwise.  I used to do shit like this, though I was more a melodic trance head and my BPM hardly ever dropped below 140. 

[Dalek]

Thanks. Yeah, I usually put more variation into a song and hate it when it gets all repetitive, but now I just decided to make something monotonous and unchanging for reasons unknown.