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UberGoth poem

Started by Cain, May 04, 2005, 06:11:25 PM

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Rev. St. Syn, KSC (Ret.)

/makes things worse

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On a darkened sphere I found thee

Embittered as sleet with a heart of stone and eyes of pure diamond

A sacred wrath building inside, ready to smite without mercy those who had torn from you that which you loved so dearly

And just as I found thee, you discovered me among the ashes of my empire

Mind spiked with revenge, heart streaked with hatred, hands caked with blood, eyes filled with the fury of loss

A burned dominion at our feet, we watched as the sun melted into the horizon, freeing us from the constraints of daylight and revealing to us the paths our nemesis (for they are one and the same) had taken out into the night,Äôs hegemony

We follow their luminous trail to the sounds of war making and find the nemesis face down in the sand, overcome by one who has blood on her hands and diamond in her eyes

A sister, not of revenge, but of justice

A new cause for this darkened sphere

Salvation for the stained that can rise above and damnation for those who cannot

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my bad
Synaptyclypse Generator Publishing Sect, POEE International Resource Center

Mangrove

Quote from: synaptyx/makes things worse

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On a darkened sphere I found thee

Embittered as sleet with a heart of stone and eyes of pure diamond

A sacred wrath building inside, ready to smite without mercy those who had torn from you that which you loved so dearly

And just as I found thee, you discovered me among the ashes of my empire

Mind spiked with revenge, heart streaked with hatred, hands caked with blood, eyes filled with the fury of loss

A burned dominion at our feet, we watched as the sun melted into the horizon, freeing us from the constraints of daylight and revealing to us the paths our nemesis (for they are one and the same) had taken out into the night,Äôs hegemony

We follow their luminous trail to the sounds of war making and find the nemesis face down in the sand, overcome by one who has blood on her hands and diamond in her eyes

A sister, not of revenge, but of justice

A new cause for this darkened sphere

Salvation for the stained that can rise above and damnation for those who cannot

---

my bad

oh dear...that really is quite vile. <gets syn' a drink>.
What makes it so? Making it so is what makes it so.

~~~~Closed~~~~

Quote from: ScribeRoses are black,
Violets are dark and doom-ridden,
Sugar is a conformist thing,
And so are you.

0/10

Mangrove

Quote from: Hotsuma
Quote from: ScribeRoses are black,
Violets are dark and doom-ridden,
Sugar is a conformist thing,
And so are you.

0/10

this poetry thread now has everything in the right place.


8)
What makes it so? Making it so is what makes it so.

Zurtok Khan

Pope T. Mangrove
tried to grope me
like the preacher at my church
well the laughs on him now
'cause in prison more then his nose is gettin' jerked.

Sorry Manny, I had to.
Resistance is Fertile.

Always acknowledge a fault. This will throw those in authority off their guard and give you an opportunity to commit more.
-Mark Twain

I thoroughly disapprove of duels. If a man should challenge me, I would take him kindly and forgivingly by the hand and lead him to a quiet place and kill him.
-Mark Twain

Rev. St. Syn, KSC (Ret.)

Quote from: Pope T.Mangrove xvii
Quote from: synaptyx/makes things worse
<snip bad poetry>
my bad
oh dear...that really is quite vile. <gets syn' a drink>.
Yay! :D Thanks Mang!
Synaptyclypse Generator Publishing Sect, POEE International Resource Center

Drunken Monkey Cabal

Quote from: Pope T.Mangrove xviiEMO/Goth Haiku....<ahem>


I sit in the dark
Oh, how I love Linkin Park!
See my knife, glinting.

linkin park are not emo. nor goth.

they nu-metal and shite. please do not confuse the two. emo is taking back sunday, finch, dashboard confession etc

Rev. St. Syn, KSC (Ret.)

Eels - emo and I like 'em, so STFU or I'll kill myself! :cry:
Synaptyclypse Generator Publishing Sect, POEE International Resource Center

LMNO

Quote from: DiL
Quote from: Pope T.Mangrove xviiEMO/Goth Haiku....<ahem>


I sit in the dark
Oh, how I love Saves The Day!
See my knife, glinting.

linkin park are not emo. nor goth.

they nu-metal and shite. please do not confuse the two. emo is taking back sunday, finch, dashboard confession etc


Fixed that one.  Happy now, emo-boy?

~~~~Closed~~~~

Quote from: DiL
Quote from: Pope T.Mangrove xviiEMO/Goth Haiku....<ahem>


I sit in the dark
Oh, how I love Linkin Park!
See my knife, glinting.

linkin park are not emo. nor goth.

they nu-metal and shite. please do not confuse the two. emo is taking back sunday, finch, dashboard confession etc


they're still angst ridden. and thus are fair game.

The Open Bar

Quote from: Zurtok KhanPope T. Mangrove
tried to grope me
like the preacher at my church
well the laughs on him now
'cause in prison more then his nose is gettin' jerked.

Sorry Manny, I had to.

mang's never been accused of sexual harrassment in a poem before.....not sure if he should be flattered or not.

<calls mang & his lawyers>

it's ok....he's flattered.

The Open Bar

Bump this thread for great justice and for BGP to submit these to the goth poetry forum!

Cain

Bumped again for the Rogue Discordian/Iron Troll Brigade hit this weekend.

Cole Frehlen

I fucking wish I was at home right now... I wrote SO MUCH shitty poetry about 5 years ago, and I've still got most of it.

Also, Eels != Emo

Bu🤠ns

One lazy late night in a hotel
Poor Burnsey was bored on his Dell
He searched for a thread
that was, more or less dead
and bumped the damned thing all to hell.