Pamphlet Draft

[Cramulus]

bump because I had completely forgotten about this

[Golden Applesauce]

Good call, Rev.

Regarding the notion that it's too preachy / evangelical -- can you guys point out some places where you think it needs some cleanup?

The bits where you're saying how the other person's life might possibly be miserable - true, but the other pamphlets that start that way have a tendency to end with "and for the low price of 19.95, you can have Jesus in your life!  It worked for me!"  Maybe clarify earlier that you don't have the answers either?  I dunno.