tarry eyed

[the dreadful hours]

i suppose this is all to atone
for some long buried grievance
or forgotten missed step

the harshness
is breathtaking and perplexing
from what bowels does it emerge

the stench of all stenches
a dank, damp feeling
i need a shower

[Anna Mae Bollocks]

Whoa. Great stuff.

But bleurrrrrgh...you nailed it well.