The Below.

[EK WAFFLR]

Question: where should I take this? Should I explore the thing I call Darkness, or continue with the story (as it were)? All input is vastly appreciated.

[navkat]

GREAT! In that case install it for your CURRENT LAPTOP while THERE'S STILL TIME!!

I don't know why but this little thing made me grin like a child.

[Placid Dingo]

Question: where should I take this? Should I explore the thing I call Darkness, or continue with the story (as it were)? All input is vastly appreciated.

I would think that that might be forcing things a bit.

It's decent prose in it's own right. I'd just keep playing as long as its flowing.

[Luna]

Question: where should I take this? Should I explore the thing I call Darkness, or continue with the story (as it were)? All input is vastly appreciated.

Let it take you where it wants to go. Good stories tell themselves, you can kill them by trying to force them.

[EK WAFFLR]

Thanks, both of you. I am a bit stuck on this piece. I think I'll just write it on the go, as I did with the last installment.

[Luna]

Thanks, both of you. I am a bit stuck on this piece. I think I'll just write it on the go, as I did with the last installment.

If it won't come at the keybaord, try on paper.  Funny, but I find it helps, sometimes.

[EK WAFFLR]

Thanks, both of you. I am a bit stuck on this piece. I think I'll just write it on the go, as I did with the last installment.

If it won't come at the keybaord, try on paper.  Funny, but I find it helps, sometimes.

Oh I know. Occasionally I get hang ups about that kind of thing. for years I could ONLY write on my old desktop computer I got back in '98. I couldn't rid myself of that habit until 2006.