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Started by EK WAFFLR, January 06, 2012, 08:29:08 AM

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EK WAFFLR

Question: where should I take this? Should I explore the thing I call Darkness, or continue with the story (as it were)? All input is vastly appreciated.
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navkat

Quote from: Triple Zero on January 13, 2012, 06:35:42 PM
GREAT! In that case install it for your CURRENT LAPTOP while THERE'S STILL TIME!!

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Placid Dingo

Quote from: Waffle Iron on January 31, 2012, 08:57:07 AM
Question: where should I take this? Should I explore the thing I call Darkness, or continue with the story (as it were)? All input is vastly appreciated.

I would think that that might be forcing things a bit.

It's decent prose in it's own right. I'd just keep playing as long as its flowing.
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Luna

Quote from: Waffle Iron on January 31, 2012, 08:57:07 AM
Question: where should I take this? Should I explore the thing I call Darkness, or continue with the story (as it were)? All input is vastly appreciated.

Let it take you where it wants to go. Good stories tell themselves, you can kill them by trying to force them.
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"My father says that almost the whole world is asleep. Everybody you know, everybody you see, everybody you talk to. He says that only a few people are awake, and they live in a state of constant, total amazement."

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If Luna was a furry, she'd sex humans and scream "BEASTIALITY!" at the top of her lungs at inopportune times.

Quote from: Nigel on March 24, 2011, 01:54:48 AM
I like the Luna one. She is a good one.

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EK WAFFLR

Thanks, both of you. I am a bit stuck on this piece. I think I'll just write it on the go, as I did with the last installment.
"At first I lifted weights.  But then I asked myself, 'why not people?'  Now everyone runs for the fjord when they see me."


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Luna

Quote from: Waffle Iron on January 31, 2012, 06:15:01 PM
Thanks, both of you. I am a bit stuck on this piece. I think I'll just write it on the go, as I did with the last installment.

If it won't come at the keybaord, try on paper.  Funny, but I find it helps, sometimes.
Death-dealing hormone freak of deliciousness
Pagan-Stomping Valkyrie of the Interbutts™
Rampaging Slayer of Shit-Fountain Habitues

"My father says that almost the whole world is asleep. Everybody you know, everybody you see, everybody you talk to. He says that only a few people are awake, and they live in a state of constant, total amazement."

Quote from: The Payne on November 16, 2011, 07:08:55 PM
If Luna was a furry, she'd sex humans and scream "BEASTIALITY!" at the top of her lungs at inopportune times.

Quote from: Nigel on March 24, 2011, 01:54:48 AM
I like the Luna one. She is a good one.

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"Stop talking to yourself.  You don't like you any better than anyone else who knows you."

EK WAFFLR

Quote from: Luna on January 31, 2012, 06:20:03 PM
Quote from: Waffle Iron on January 31, 2012, 06:15:01 PM
Thanks, both of you. I am a bit stuck on this piece. I think I'll just write it on the go, as I did with the last installment.

If it won't come at the keybaord, try on paper.  Funny, but I find it helps, sometimes.

Oh I know. Occasionally I get hang ups about that kind of thing. for years I could ONLY write on my old desktop computer I got back in '98. I couldn't rid myself of that habit until 2006.
"At first I lifted weights.  But then I asked myself, 'why not people?'  Now everyone runs for the fjord when they see me."


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