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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #15 on: November 30, 2012, 04:54:21 pm »
so....
people like you are common in Hungary?  :sad:

humor is frequently found in the tension between some point and its obscurity due to some vagueness which is then pierced.  otherwise it's nonsense, which can be aesthetically pleasing in its own right.

...can be.

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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #16 on: November 30, 2012, 05:07:58 pm »
so....
people like you are common in Hungary?  :sad:

Actually, not particularly...


humor is frequently found in the tension between some point and its obscurity due to some vagueness which is then pierced.  otherwise it's nonsense, which can be aesthetically pleasing in its own right.

...can be.

hmm. So my explanations about what the points are are not worthy of comment?
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« Reply #17 on: November 30, 2012, 07:18:44 pm »
I don't care how verbose he is, a brainy man would have had better grammatical sense than to use "now" twice in the first sentence just as he did, knowing it would grate on the eyes and ears of brainier men than he.

Also, something being placed in an exhibit only means that the person placing it there might like it, but has no indication of its quality otherwise.

And it WAS just like xkcd except for the part where it wasn't funny and wasn't anything like it
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #18 on: November 30, 2012, 11:13:34 pm »
I liked the white spaces between the pictures.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #19 on: December 01, 2012, 08:06:54 am »
I liked the first one. It's so true and shit.  :lulz:

I don't like the artwork!
I get the contrast thing you did with it, but it's not my thing. Not this time at least.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #20 on: December 01, 2012, 08:08:54 am »
Being totally objective, seriously.

I don't get it.

Really I don't. You failed in your delivery.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #21 on: December 01, 2012, 08:13:43 am »
And honestly I wanted to like it, so I could ride a high horse.

Hey, I can be a dick too, just a more moral and indignant one.

But seriously dude, I don't know if it's a Hungarian humor thing, if something's getting lost in translation or what.

But being familiar with American, British, and Irish humor... it's just some dull, meaningless conversation. But as an honest critique, I just don't get it.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #22 on: December 01, 2012, 10:42:08 pm »
:boring: :boring: :boring: :boring: :boring:/5

If you fail to reach the audience, then you have failed. And your comic did. Your totally insufferable response to critiques is no one likes you. If you want worship, then a) don't post it here because slobbering praise is not in PD's make up, and b) don't ask us to "slag it" if you're gonna refuse all suggestions anyway.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #23 on: December 02, 2012, 02:14:44 am »

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« Reply #24 on: December 02, 2012, 02:17:53 am »

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« Reply #25 on: December 02, 2012, 02:21:49 am »

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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #26 on: December 02, 2012, 03:06:55 am »
Oh, shit.  :lulz: :lulz: :lulz: Paes, delivering the coup de grace.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #27 on: December 02, 2012, 07:51:51 am »


Brilliant! How long did it take you?
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #28 on: December 02, 2012, 07:54:16 am »
Of course, it's also a bit of a sleight of hand... I was talking to iptous, so while funny, the comic lies about me. Which makes it propaganda? Maybe not quite.
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Re: Mah furst evur webkomik
« Reply #29 on: December 02, 2012, 07:57:25 am »
If you fail to reach the audience, then you have failed. And your comic did. Your totally insufferable response to critiques is no one likes you. If you want worship, then a) don't post it here because slobbering praise is not in PD's make up, and b) don't ask us to "slag it" if you're gonna refuse all suggestions anyway.

Well boo-hoo, but not quite. I produced some pictures. I showed it some people. Most found them funny in an understated way, some encouraged me to exhibit them. One bunch of people, in a bizarre corner of my life, who are largely rather hostile towards me for other reasons, decided it wasn't worth shit.

Story of the artists life, really.

I don't mind it being slagged, but I think the only valid criticism offered so far was offered by Iptous, at the beginning. "I don't get it"', "It sucks" and "It's not funny" are not valid forms of criticism, and if they are offered as such (rather than opinion, which is what they are), that really only speaks about the person(s) offering them. Not nicely.  :lulz:
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