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Familiar Heroes, part III of V

Started by The Good Reverend Roger, January 05, 2011, 03:53:37 PM

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The Good Reverend Roger

Quote from: Doktor Phox on January 05, 2011, 04:14:11 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on January 05, 2011, 04:10:20 PM
Quote from: Doktor Phox on January 05, 2011, 04:07:38 PM
Eh. I didn't find this one as emotionally evocative as the other two. It's good, but I liked the others better.

I felt the same thing when I wrote it, but I wanted to have fun with the idea of the poor bastard who has to pick up after the superheroes, and do all the maintenance and other things that lets them do their thing.

Nobody ever thinks about that sort of thing.  WHO does maintenance on an invisible plane?  Who reloads Batman's weapons?  

Someone's got to do it.

Oh, yes. I do like it very much. It is an interesting thing to consider. But it seems a bit out of place. But, if you're having fun with it, who gives a fuck what I think?

I do.  I need both kinds of feedback.  Hearing what people like is helpful, because it tells me where to focus, but hearing what people don't like helps a lot, too, so I can learn from mistakes.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Sister Fracture

I liked this a whole lot, because everything I see or hear about is goddamn miserable, even the fun stuff, so it's really nice when something ISN'T depressing as fuck.

Roaring Berserkery Bunny of the North End™

A Tucsonite is like a Christian in several important ways.  For one thing, they believe what they say about their god in the most literal, straightfaced way possible.  For another, they both know their god can hear them.  The difference between the two, however, is quite vast in terms of their relationship with their god; Christians believe in His benevolence, but Tucsonites KNOW of The City's spite and hate.

Juana

"I dispose of obsolete meat machines.  Not because I hate them (I do) and not because they deserve it (they do), but because they are in the way and those older ones don't meet emissions codes.  They emit too much.  You don't like them and I don't like them, so spare me the hysteria."

Richter

This, and the rest of the series = awesome.  ::mittens::


Quote from: Eater of Clowns on May 22, 2015, 03:00:53 AM
Anyone ever think about how Richter inhabits the same reality as you and just scream and scream and scream, but in a good way?   :lulz:

Friendly Neighborhood Mentat

Fujikoma

I've liked every one of these so far. Awesome work, TGRR.

The Good Reverend Roger

Quote from: Fujikoma on January 05, 2011, 08:58:34 PM
I've liked every one of these so far. Awesome work, TGRR.

Heh.  Go back and read "A Brief Explanation, parts I-V".

But that series, you have to read in order, or it ruins the effect.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Phox

Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on January 05, 2011, 04:35:31 PM
Quote from: Doktor Phox on January 05, 2011, 04:14:11 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on January 05, 2011, 04:10:20 PM
Quote from: Doktor Phox on January 05, 2011, 04:07:38 PM
Eh. I didn't find this one as emotionally evocative as the other two. It's good, but I liked the others better.

I felt the same thing when I wrote it, but I wanted to have fun with the idea of the poor bastard who has to pick up after the superheroes, and do all the maintenance and other things that lets them do their thing.

Nobody ever thinks about that sort of thing.  WHO does maintenance on an invisible plane?  Who reloads Batman's weapons?  

Someone's got to do it.

Oh, yes. I do like it very much. It is an interesting thing to consider. But it seems a bit out of place. But, if you're having fun with it, who gives a fuck what I think?

I do.  I need both kinds of feedback.  Hearing what people like is helpful, because it tells me where to focus, but hearing what people don't like helps a lot, too, so I can learn from mistakes.

I wouldn't call anything in this a "Mistake". My only problem with it is that it seems to me to be breaking the "theme" of the series, by focusing on an outside party rather than a specific hero. Which, depending on how the other two come out, may not actually be theme breaking at all. Can't really judge it until it's finished, after all.

Fujikoma

Uh oh, I think I may have read a few of those out of order... I'll get right on that.

Have you ever written a book, or thought about it? I tried a few dozen times, but I'd get about thirty pages in at most and rip it to shreds... Probably warranted, I write like shit (and my world view is too inconsistent) :lulz:.

The Wizard

I think this is my favorite of the ones you've done, TGRR. I'm pretty sure there's a comic like this, instead of being the butler, its the guys who are contracted to clean up after the super fights. Imagine rebuilding a city block after its been hit by Doctor Doom or Chemo...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Damage_Control_%28comics%29
Insanity we trust.

President Television

I like. Somewhat out of left field compared to the other two, but that's a good thing as far as I'm concerned. The second one had a different mood than the first, so as far as I'm concerned there's nothing wrong with this one having a different mood as well.
My shit list: Stephen Harper, anarchists that complain about taxes instead of institutionalized torture, those people walking, anyone who lets a single aspect of themselves define their entire personality, salesmen that don't smoke pipes, Fredericton New Brunswick, bigots, philosophy majors, my nemesis, pirates that don't do anything, criminals without class, sociopaths, narcissists, furries, juggalos, foes.

Mesozoic Mister Nigel

Heeee! I like this one! Because, of course, what about the dirty back-end of superheroing? Who cleans up the mess when they puke? Nobody ever thinks about that.
"I'm guessing it was January 2007, a meeting in Bethesda, we got a bag of bees and just started smashing them on the desk," Charles Wick said. "It was very complicated."


Luna

Track down a comic series called "The Boys."  Garth Ennis at his most twisted.
Death-dealing hormone freak of deliciousness
Pagan-Stomping Valkyrie of the Interbutts™
Rampaging Slayer of Shit-Fountain Habitues

"My father says that almost the whole world is asleep. Everybody you know, everybody you see, everybody you talk to. He says that only a few people are awake, and they live in a state of constant, total amazement."

Quote from: The Payne on November 16, 2011, 07:08:55 PM
If Luna was a furry, she'd sex humans and scream "BEASTIALITY!" at the top of her lungs at inopportune times.

Quote from: Nigel on March 24, 2011, 01:54:48 AM
I like the Luna one. She is a good one.

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"Stop talking to yourself.  You don't like you any better than anyone else who knows you."

BadBeast

#27
This is kind of why Alan Moore thought up the character of John Constantine and put him into Swamp Thing. So that John, (An expert in his field) could bring the "Muck encrusted mockery of a man" out of his sulk in Slaughter Swamp, and up to speed on his new role as Guardian of the Green, and its occult implications.
But someone not part of the established DC/Vertigo Universe.
(JC is Vertigo's longest running title now)

ETA, And this has real potential as a character. Having papers on the JLA, Batman, and Wonder Woman, must be quite a secure position.
"We need a plane for Bombing, Strafing, Assault and Battery, Interception, Ground Support, and Reconaissance,
NOT JUST A "FAIR WEATHER FIGHTER"!

"I kinda like him. It's like he sees inside my soul" ~ Nigel


Whoever puts their hand on me to govern me, is a usurper, and a tyrant, and I declare them my enemy!

"And when the clouds obscure the moon, and normal service is resumed. It wont. Mean. A. Thing"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpkCJDYxH-4

The Good Reverend Roger

Bump, because it occurs to me that I wrote this LONG before I read The Boys.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

The Good Reverend Roger

Quote from: Luna on April 19, 2011, 01:46:20 PM
Track down a comic series called "The Boys."  Garth Ennis at his most twisted.

HAH!
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.