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Eris Said Fuck It

Started by Iron Sulfide, May 22, 2006, 09:01:14 PM

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Iron Sulfide

May 22, 2006, 09:01:14 PM
i was writing last night, and i kinda...invoked eris.

yeah, not the best idea, but y'know... i'm pretty farkin crazy.

anyways, after she wasn't much help to me and my efforts, she took hold
and wrote this. i'm not sure exactly what it's hinting at. it could even be a joke.

but i'm really not sure.

Here:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is just a simple note
A half inspired spark of wit
To all of those I Wish I Smote
You putrid piles of rancid shit

I profane your name to my heart,Äôs content
Your time- it came, and was, and went
You Grey Faced Fuckers and Laugh-less Liars
We sinners of saints will set you to pyres

And smoke the roach of your mortal remains
Strike that last one, I just took a hit
It,Äôs far too cruel to set you to flames
And I haven,Äôt the want of building a pit

But I let you live last time and now?
Look at all that you have done
Don,Äôt you feel like a milking sow?
What kind of game are you trying to run?

I guess the only option flat-
Is to Eat what Can, and Will, be Et
And shit you out, what can be shat
And spread your mess in the flower bed.

-signed Eris

poo poo ka-choo!

Ps

I,Äôm being serious, but I feel funny,Ķ

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the ps just sends chills through me, or maybe it's the fan by the window?

or maybe it the shit about to hit that fan. i felt this hould be shared, even though i haven't given PD.com a thought for a while.

well, i've someone to kill now. or was it something?

-Prater Festwo, patron sinner of saints, the Architech's Bitch, Mortal remains of Nietzsche Von Bastard, Saint Bastard, KSC, DM, LD, PPS
Ya' stupid Yank.

Irreverend Hugh, KSC

#1
May 31, 2006, 09:40:54 AM
10/10?
"Time for the tin-foil hats, girls and boys!"

Idem

#2
May 31, 2006, 10:40:18 AM
Quote from: Irreverend Hugh, KSC10/10?
I agree?

B_M_W

#3
May 31, 2006, 01:55:40 PM
Nice. Im not really into rhyming poetry, and I liked this one.


Idem, you must be excitedly waiting for spore, huh?
One by one, we break the sheep from their Iron Bar Prisons and expand their imaginations, make them think for themselves. In turn, they break more from their prisons. Eventually, critical mass is reached. Our key word: Resolve. Evangelize with compassion and determination. And realize that there will be few in the beginning. We are hand picking our successors. They are the future of Discordianism. Let us guide our future with intelligence.

     --Reverse Brainwashing: A Guide http://www.principiadiscordia.com/forum/index.php?topic=9801.0

6.5 billion Buddhas walking around.

99.xxxxxxx% forgot they are Buddha.

Idem

#4
May 31, 2006, 11:34:00 PM
Quote from: Buddhist_Monk_WannabeNice. Im not really into rhyming poetry, and I liked this one.


Idem, you must be excitedly waiting for spore, huh?
Yeah, unfortunately...

Hoshiko

#5
June 04, 2006, 12:30:18 AM
11/10, if only for making "You putrid piles of rancid shit" sound elegant.
Making people sorry they asked since 1983.

                   **************************
She got the speakers in the trunk
With the bass on crunk.

Felix

#6
June 11, 2006, 07:30:12 PM
Might go well with some accompaniment; it was sort of hard to detect the beat part way through.  Other than that I dig it as far as 10.

AJAtheMetastasis

#7
June 18, 2006, 03:08:17 AM
10/10

Eris has always been a wee bit unpredictable...which is good...right?   :wink:
You disbelieve in Ghosts and God - because you have not seen them? What! You have never seen the mocking ghosts of your beliefs? - the Laughing Bedlam of your humility or Mammon - your grotesque Ideas of "Self"? Yea, your very faculties and your most courageous Lies are Gods! Who is the slayer of your Gods - but a God!

Austin Osman Spare

The Good Reverend Roger

#8
June 18, 2006, 06:24:03 PM
9/10.

The East German judge dinged you for saying you "invoked Eris".

TGRR,
Really can't talk about this Mahdgjickque stuff with a straight face, anymore.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Iron Sulfide

#9
June 28, 2006, 09:41:53 PM
yeah, i say "invoked" because it's easier for the layman to play along if i do.

she still be droppin das boots
Ya' stupid Yank.

Iron Sulfide

#10
June 28, 2006, 09:46:23 PM
Quote from: FelixMight go well with some accompaniment; it was sort of hard to detect the beat part way through.  Other than that I dig it as far as 10.

verses = "The Five Stages" (catmatic drivel)

that's why, i think, smoking roaches was mentioned- as well as the irregularities and confused meter- in the third stanza.

could be bullshit, though.
Ya' stupid Yank.
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