I don´t know if this topic already exists. If you got a poem, short writing or something just post it here.
Wish I was a poetic genious but
bored to death of
reading the pages of poets
the
tears
run
down
down
down
the page till they drop off
I'd rather be fucking
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisWish I was a poetic genious but
bored to death of
reading the pages of poets
the
tears
run
down
down
down
the page till they drop off
I'd rather be fucking
:lol: well the way you used the page was poetic ....running down, and the pun in the end was nice too
when i hear a girl
any girl a pretty girl
a fat girl with poor
concept of self
say
I'm as pure as the
driven snow
( pause to think )
have so seen snow thats been driven in?
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferiswhen i hear a girl
any girl a pretty girl
a fat girl with poor
concept of self
say
I'm as pure as the
driven snow
( pause to think )
have so seen snow thats been driven in?
you´re bad :lol:
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferiswhen i hear a girl
any girl a pretty girl
a fat girl with poor
concept of self
say
I'm as pure as the
driven snow
( pause to think )
have so seen snow thats been driven in?
you´re bad :lol:
I'm bad. But smile?
shakes head confused
He smiles because he's also bad.
thanks for the
twice said
words
i
miss you more
then jesus
into my heart
this great misunderstanding.
When i saw the sunrise for a first time
it was Appolo I was looking at.
I wondered what to teach me he had
the lust of laughing, the joy of wine?
In time I learned what he was about
reason, intelligence and logic schemes
no time for childish thoughts and dreams
his expresions always firm and stout.
As I grew I admired this statue
that masculin figure
that perfect picture
of wisdom, knowledge and solemn virtue
One day I stepped into the world
and learned much about new things
about beauty, songs and feelings
so many things he hadn´t told?
The statue still stood firm and impressive
but my adoration grew lesser
as my curiousity grew stronger
the appolonian virtues in me got lassive.
I woke up realising one day
that he had thought me how to survive but not to live
except lectures in keeping your soul hidden he had nothing more to give
it was then I turned my back at him and went my way.
Appolonius my kin you still stand firm and high
but your power over me has gone
No more fake wisdom more to come
I do not know you and stopped to wonder why.
If you're on a date
With my gate
Then don't be late
And it'll be great
On your date
With my gate
(Thank you, I'm here all week)
Quote from: MedeoIf you're on a date
With my gate
Then don't be late
And it'll be great
On your date
With my gate
(Thank you, I'm here all week)
are you available for weddings?
Quote from: Medeo(Thank you, I'm here all week)
Maybe I need a vacation.Pay no attention to the disembodied voice. He just lacks critical mass.
I'm hear, all weak!
Weak
Week
Bleak
Meek
Shriek
Freak
Geek
Meek
Chic
Leek
Leak
Quote from: MedeoWeak
Week
Bleak
Meek
Shriek
Freak
Geek
Meek
Chic
Leek
Leak
very expressionistic
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Most poems rhyme,
But this one doesn't.
Ode to a talk about Gangs at the Bruce
rabid influence of strangers
contaminated thought process
one thousand empty homeless shelters bakeing in the rain
playgirl serona
the rabit over the pyramid
cancerous discordian police men talking creative order over destructive discord
and us the parents agree
All these embraces
and all those gentle gazes
I don´t really mind.
Their kind warm voices
talk to me while my heart races
for them it´s I hide .
How come they like me
and don´t see the misery
here inside of me.
Nothing here seems real,
noone knows how much I feel
like dying inside.
"I'd Love to Love You Lover"
I'm her friend
she's not mine.
when I call for a supportive ear she dosen't have the time .
the time I give to her I never allow abuse.
she used to lie to me ( there are other ways to seduce)
I realize this is true but don't fill my heart with hate
I'll still be her friend and find love(elsewhere). I can wait.
liked it :D
Earth, receive an honoured guest
William Yeats is laid to rest
I wish they'd shot the little pest
169 owned! Never test!
Quote from: The Good Reverend RogerEarth, receive an honoured guest
William Yeats is laid to rest
I wish they'd shot the little pest
169 owned! Never test!
i´ve seen this one before somewhere on the forum...
Quote from: Den Sorte Dragenliked it :D
thank you... I really appreciate that from someone who obviously enjoys poetry.
will try to post more as they come to me.
I like it, too.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte Dragenliked it :D
thank you... I really appreciate that from someone who obviously enjoys poetry.
will try to post more as they come to me.
and it kinda showed a side from you we´re not used to, one reason why i liked it. And the use of space in between the verses (I don´t think that was random)
Roger's repeating himself. Never a good sign. Possiblility of serious disturbance, and well as turbulence at high elevations.
Quote from: gnimbleyRoger's repeating himself. Never a good sign. Possiblility of serious disturbance, and well as turbulence at high elevations.
but might get funny (Air alzheimer, this is your cptn speaking.....Air alzheimer, this is your cptn speaking.....Air alzheimer, this is your cptn speaking.....Air alzheimer, this is your cptn speaking.....)
...and we've been circleing like this for hours
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferis...and we've been circleing like this for hours
:lol: he wouldn´t know
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte Dragenliked it :D
thank you... I really appreciate that from someone who obviously enjoys poetry.
will try to post more as they come to me.
and it kinda showed a side from you we´re not used to, one reason why i liked it. And the use of space in between the verses (I don´t think that was random)
my friends say that same thing to me whenever I get around to submitting a play ( as oppossed to the skits I normaly submitt)...
some of my other friends ask if those guys really talk to me.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte Dragenliked it :D
thank you... I really appreciate that from someone who obviously enjoys poetry.
will try to post more as they come to me.
and it kinda showed a side from you we´re not used to, one reason why i liked it. And the use of space in between the verses (I don´t think that was random)
my friends say that same thing to me whenever I get around to submitting a play ( as oppossed to the skits I normaly submitt)...
some of my other friends ask if those guys really talk to me.
bit confused, what are skits? and who is talkin to you?
skits are short comedy bits that they show on the likes of saturday night live or monty python.
no one now... just unable to convey acuratly at that time an event that happened in the past.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisskits are short comedy bits that they show on the likes of saturday night live or monty python.
Quote
I know that as sketches
I know it as that as well...
we here in the states need to slang even our jargon out.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisI know it as that as well...
we here in the states need to slang even our jargon out.
slang in the USA seems to be a way to keep non-native speaking Europeans confused (only yesterday I learned about what sophmorish ment = a Taojonesian term for childish)
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisI know it as that as well...
we here in the states need to slang even our jargon out.
slang in the USA seems to be a way to keep non-native speaking Europeans confused (only yesterday I learned about what sophmorish ment = a Taojonesian term for childish)
just doing our part to combat terrorism.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisI know it as that as well...
we here in the states need to slang even our jargon out.
slang in the USA seems to be a way to keep non-native speaking Europeans confused (only yesterday I learned about what sophmorish ment = a Taojonesian term for childish)
just doing our part to combat terrorism.
Am i a terrorist?
Do I look like a CIA agent to you?!?!?
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisDo I look like a CIA agent to you?!?!?
yes
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisDo I look like a CIA agent to you?!?!?
they wouldn´t know
and your avatar looks strikingly as my old one.....are you me?Am I Medeo?
alrighty then.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisalrighty then.
You are THE alrighty?
the childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
Cool name.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
what are you talking about
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
what are you talking about
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
what are you talking about
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
whats a childrens ridge?
whats a river team?
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
what are you talking about
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
whats a childrens ridge?
whats a river team?
children's(the people doing the activity)... ridge to river(The name of the event) ...
team ( rather than just one individual)... the bruce ( the name of the building I live in)... Bruce almighty ( a movie)
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
what are you talking about
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisthe childrens ridge to river team from my home was the bruce almighty team...
whats a childrens ridge?
whats a river team?
children's(the people doing the activity)... ridge to river(The name of the event) ...
team ( rather than just one individual)... the bruce ( the name of the building I live in)... Bruce almighty ( a movie)
so the name of the childrens team of your town in a rafting event
in my building... the bruce... skiing bikeing running rafting...
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisin my building... the bruce... skiing bikeing running rafting...
the bruce? the scotsman?
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisin my building... the bruce... skiing bikeing running rafting...
the bruce? the scotsman?
mainly the scotts men but pretty much because we have a lot of scottmen there now.
Is there any Scotch tape involved?
or masking tape?
this way we wont know who it is,,,
sorry neither type of tapeyou to mentioned..
just duct and ticker.
I was hoping it was a video tape.
Quote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomI was hoping it was a video tape.
I don't have the other two ingredients
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomI was hoping it was a video tape.
I don't have the other two ingredients
That's okay, I'm sure the gnome has them and he'll loan them to you when he gets back to the forest.
Quote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomI was hoping it was a video tape.
I don't have the other two ingredients
That's okay, I'm sure the gnome has them and he'll loan them to you when he gets back to the forest.
Gnomes have sex?!?!?
and lies?!?!?
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomQuote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisQuote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomI was hoping it was a video tape.
I don't have the other two ingredients
That's okay, I'm sure the gnome has them and he'll loan them to you when he gets back to the forest.
Gnomes have sex?!?!?
and lies?!?!?
Are you kidding? Haven't you read his blog lately?
Gnomes have very exciting lives, in between all the worrying.
hhhhmmmm.... ok
Do smurfs have sex? I mean there´s the gorgeous evil blackhaired Smurfette
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenDo smurfs have sex? I mean there´s the gorgeous evil blackhaired Smurfette
smurf reproduce asexually....
what the hell... look smurfs are fictional characters . we're talking about gnomes over here ok?!?!?
Yeah, gnomes are obviously not fictional (said the zombie)....I mean
we have one right here in the forest....I mean forum.
smurfs?!?!?
sheeesh.
you don't like smurfs?!?!?!?!
My little brother loved them.... I tolerated them.
Quote from: SssBella, Oracle of Doomyou don't like smurfs?!?!?!?!
If properly cooked...
Quote from: The Good Reverend RogerQuote from: SssBella, Oracle of Doomyou don't like smurfs?!?!?!?!
If properly cooked...
Mmmm......I'll roast a few and toast a few. :twisted:
Boil and bake and broil a few...
Quote from: The Good Reverend RogerQuote from: SssBella, Oracle of Doomyou don't like smurfs?!?!?!?!
If properly cooked...
the good reverend gargamel?
Why not? He's certainly the anti-smurf.
Quote from: Malaria test subject #777Why not? He's certainly the anti-smurf.
the anti-smurf?.....reverend roger is one of those black smurfs thazt bite you in the ass? I´ll watch my ass on the devival
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: Malaria test subject #777Why not? He's certainly the anti-smurf.
the anti-smurf?.....reverend roger is one of those black smurfs thazt bite you in the ass? I´ll watch my ass on the devival
Roger? Nope, I was talking about gargomel as the anti-smurf.
Sorry, I will not qrite a poeam cause I'm rather not a poetic genious :) but I can tell you to read certainly poems of Arthur Rimbaud and Charles Baudelaire. Check it out!!!!
you know some polish poetry? I'm from Poland so if you want I can give you some samples :)
Whaaah.... discussion about Smurfs? I used to hate them when they were on tv. only poor gargamel- sorrounded by some nasty, viscious blue creatures
:) :) :)
Quote from: WeselinaWhaaah.... discussion about Smurfs? I used to hate them when they were on tv. only poor gargamel- sorrounded by some nasty, viscious blue creatures
:) :) :)
black smurfette ruled
someone called me that the other day!!
My hair is black now , not pink
and I was inna foul mood so it kinda works I guess
Quote from: Malaulsomeone called me that the other day!!
My hair is black now , not pink
and I was inna foul mood so it kinda works I guess
*lol*
Now it is growing again I´ll probably be wearin blue and dark red streks through hair sometimes
nice
There is a corner in my room
a place I´ld seek out to be gone
when everything at home would go wrong.
There is a corner in my room
the only place where I could hide
every time they would fight
There is a corner in my room
where none of them would be
and none of them would notice me.
There is a corner in my room
where I would dream away
in a world of fantasy where I could stay.
There is a corner in my room
where I´ld wait for hours after school was out
just to wait untill they´ld stop to shout.
There is a corner in a room
that I now have come to loath
cause its the only place I remember from my youth.
I recognize that corner, Dragen.
This is lovely in a very bitter/sweet way.
Quote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomI recognize that corner, Dragen.
This is lovely in a very bitter/sweet way.
Thx
I think a lot of us have a corner like that. I guess its why i keep postponing relationships/having kids....just wanna make sure i do things right
With recless art, I drew my part,
Hopeless is the faint of heart,
With wisdom is the truth revealed,
To face the stare, you will not dare,
But know that I don,Äôt really care,
And that your fate is sealed.
Quote from: H'rulghin DongermaxWith recless art, I drew my part,
Hopeless is the faint of heart,
With wisdom is the truth revealed,
To face the stare, you will not dare,
But know that I don,Äôt really care,
And that your fate is sealed.
what is it exactly about?
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: H'rulghin DongermaxWith recless art, I drew my part,
Hopeless is the faint of heart,
With wisdom is the truth revealed,
To face the stare, you will not dare,
But know that I don,Äôt really care,
And that your fate is sealed.
what is it exactly about?
Okey of i transalate it it goes something like this:
I never cared but you had no idea and you'll be gone so it doesn't matter anyway.
Damn, I thought I had it set to log me in automatically... :?
Quote from: AnonymousQuote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: H'rulghin DongermaxWith recless art, I drew my part,
Hopeless is the faint of heart,
With wisdom is the truth revealed,
To face the stare, you will not dare,
But know that I don’t really care,
And that your fate is sealed.
what is it exactly about?
Okey of i transalate it it goes something like this:
I never cared but you had no idea and you'll be gone so it doesn't matter anyway.
sad but nice
Flameing skull fuck
a man in each ear...
the jolley roger.
Quote from: chaosgraves:agentoferisFlameing skull fuck
a man in each ear...
the jolley roger.
the kafka strikes back
opde to a drunken pirat is being written.
Ok, I'll throw this in here... I wrote it 5 years ago, haven't dusted it off in about 2 years, but with shrub's Operation: Haliburton, it seems somewhat topical again... It's long and still a bit clunky in places, though... just warnin' ya...
There All Honor Lies
Show me horrors everyday
Down upon your knees, you prey
Violence and hipocrisy
Grief and sorrow, but none from me
Images of blood and tears
Look distant after all these years
Talk of Honor, Duty, Pride
But I am long since dead inside
I am long since dead inside
And I know where all honor lies
I can see it in their eyes
As they suffer and they die
I know where their honor lies
I know where their honor lies
Hoist the banner and wave it proud
Hold the line and stand your ground
Draw a line deep in the sand
Might made right by your own hand
Flags are waving high above
The line drawn deep in our children's blood
Preach your cause with noble eyes
But I know where your honor lies
I know where your honor lies
And I know where all honor lies
I have seen it in their eyes
As they suffered and they died
I know where their honor lies
I know where their honor lies
Talk to me of wounded pride
Talk to me of wrong and right
Talk to me of genocide
Talk to me of genocide
Obligations, promises made
Religious war, divine crusade
Moral mask that I see through
Repeat the lie to make it true
Sacrifice the young and blind
Your honor will be satisfied
But you are long since dead inside
You are long since dead inside
But I know where all honor lies
I have seen it in their eyes
I have seen them crucified
I know where their honor lies
I know where their honor lies
And I know where all honor lies
I can see it in their eyes
I have watched them as they died
I have seen their fratricide
I have seen their genocide
And I know where all honor lies
I have seen it in their eyes
I have seen them crucified
I have seen them plead and cry
I have heard them beg to die
And I have seen your wretched lie
I recognize the thin disguise
Hidden in your lying eyes
I am left numb by the size
Of the sea of bodies left behind
But I know where all honor lies
I have seen it in their eyes
As they suffer and they die
I know where their honor lies
I know where their honor lies
And I know where all honor lies
I can see it in their eyes
I have seen them crucified
I know where all honor lies
I know where all honor lies
Feed the cycle, feed the machine
feed the tyrant's twisted dream
Dead for country, dead for king
As if that ever changed anything
As if that ever changed anything
There amidst the gardens of stone
There All Honor Lies
-CF
hmm dusting off good idea .......
collapsing cycles bring forth the new dawn a golden order....but to know and still be able to embrace the apathetic destruction of the great satan..
The door swung open as upside-down boy entered. all eyes fell upon him , his presence while foretold was unexpected...llillith most of was taken aback . having left his soul tied to the tree of knowledge . she was sure the wolf still guarded .. butt there he stood the child of both neaderthal and the invaders from the south....those with less hair on their bodies and the darker colour ..to free this yeti child some one or something must of payed dearly...however now was the time for action...sensing her desire peanut butter and marmalaude rose and flanked pineal warrior...
the room was held in electric shock as the upiside-down boy lashed out ...terrorism from within bringing about babylons fall..butt stifled entertained masses were infomed by the media of yet anouther popstar scandle ..so the story of poor upside down boy is buried on the left coloum of page 45 under the ad for new big screen televisions...
five years passed but upside down boy had witheld from all attempt to remold him into a consumer of culture.. the tests while devious and at times ditracting.. like the morning he awoke as if from a dream and was in anothers life....butt the walls bled with the screams of unborn ..the boundry push and shove game in relationships wore at thr heart of him. as time passed at releases proved to be yet more of a box constricting walls...inside his head cutting off the flow of pineal oils and yet with such pure evil intent Gia's child was fooled..luckily never for long eris's love was so absent it was unto like being in her notice...so plodding yeti strides the upside-down boy greeted the future...
@colonel failure
nice poem, I liked the conclusive part very much
Quote from: Anonymous@colonel failure
nice poem, I liked the conclusive part very much
oops this was me
Quote from: Den Sorte DragenQuote from: Anonymous@colonel failure
nice poem, I liked the conclusive part very much
oops this was me
Thank you.
8)
I like it, too.
It reminds me of the time I wandered through Arlington National Cemetary....it was so sad.
PS: Did you guys know that Lincoln started Arlington on the grounds of Robert E Lee's home during the civil war?
When Lee came home from the war his plantation was filled with the bodies of the union dead.
Quote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomI like it, too.
It reminds me of the time I wandered through Arlington National Cemetary....it was so sad.
PS: Did you guys know that Lincoln started Arlington on the grounds of Robert E Lee's home during the civil war?
When Lee came home from the war his plantation was filled with the bodies of the union dead.
what crops did he grow before it became a cemetary....Lee commin home sayin "where´s Korn?"
Not too sure. I know that the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier is right smack in the middle of what used to be Mrs. Lee's rose garden. The house itself is right up behind the tomb. It sits on a hill and overlooks what is now acre after acre of tombstones. Highly ironic.
Quote from: SssBella, Oracle of DoomNot too sure. I know that the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier is right smack in the middle of what used to be Mrs. Lee's rose garden. The house itself is right up behind the tomb. It sits on a hill and overlooks what is now acre after acre of tombstones. Highly ironic.
*lol* Lincoln saying to Lee: "I never promised you a rose garden."