Principia Discordia

Principia Discordia => Or Kill Me => Topic started by: Q. G. Pennyworth on February 01, 2016, 02:43:38 PM

Title: Have You Done It Yet
Post by: Q. G. Pennyworth on February 01, 2016, 02:43:38 PM
Have you fed the people your country was forsaking?
Have you fought down the demons of your own making?
Have you felt the weight of the world in your hand?
Have you taken up arms in defense of your land?
Will the ones who come after us all understand?
Have you done it yet?

Have you spoken the truth though your voice was shaking?
Have you held your ground as your knees were quaking?
Have you felt the bite of the cold and the rain?
Have you held the line and screamed through the pain?
Will the ones who were there remember your name?
Have you done it yet?

Have you guarded the children the police were tazing?
Have you breathed the smoke as the streets were blazing?
Have you rescued a stranger from the wild fray?
Have you guarded the ones who knelt down to pray?
Will the video show you did not run away?
Have you done it yet?

Have you filmed the lives that the army was taking?
Have you fought the charges the state was inflating?
Have you tended the wounded and carried the lame?
Have you cried with the fallen and shouted their name?
Will the world that we know never be the same?
Have you done it yet?

Have you carried your load though your back was breaking?
Have you changed the course a country was taking?
Have you planted yourself at the river of truth?
Have you told the whole world "no, you move"?
Will history books and grandchildren approve?
Have you done it yet?
Title: Re: Have You Done It Yet
Post by: The Wizard Joseph on February 01, 2016, 03:08:39 PM
 :mittens: I got very serious chills and a couple flashbacks from that.
Title: Re: Have You Done It Yet
Post by: Vanadium Gryllz on February 01, 2016, 03:10:30 PM
I like it!

I feel like there's more I could say but I don't know how to phrase it so i'll leave it at that.
Title: Re: Have You Done It Yet
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on February 01, 2016, 03:41:59 PM
I really like the direction your writing has been taking.
Title: Re: Have You Done It Yet
Post by: Q. G. Pennyworth on February 01, 2016, 03:57:44 PM
This one I completely forgot about for a couple months, just dug it up and did some tidying this morning.