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Principia Discordia => Literate Chaotic => Topic started by: Babo Flatulentius the 3rd on July 04, 2017, 11:56:06 PM

Title: "Exit" - a poem
Post by: Babo Flatulentius the 3rd on July 04, 2017, 11:56:06 PM
exit

you fake
you break down and cry
don´t  take that step
for heavens sake


fucked up shell
golden inside
a beautiful hell
we hide

it´s written in the books
but we´re too afraid to read
harvest the trees
but never understand the seed

if fear is a demon
I kiss this monsters face
caress a dead heart
and study an insane race



[burp! now my medulla oblongata is itching... meh]
Title: Re: "Exit" - a poem
Post by: Cramulus on July 06, 2017, 03:23:33 PM
I like it.

I like the meter - the second stanza has a cool little jump at the end