Part Five
(parts one through four to follow, naturally)
The weight of the world isn't on your shoulders. It isn't on mine. The "weight of the world" isn't. No, stop. Stop it... dammit, stop. The end. Zip. Click! Annoying whiny buzzer. That REALLY IS all there IS. Stop being, and see. Stop for one second and realize it, and there will be no further need of any future time-frames. JUST STOP! No more! That's the end of it.
(of course, we must elaborate from here)
ILLUSTRATION: Here we have mankind staring into the mysteries of the universe, and by his very concentration causing all of it. By the fact that he was given this vision, faces have been painted on a reality which otherwise would be just dandy. So do you kill him or save him? Ah, the quetion which plagues him. And that being that, he can almost that both are the same. If he could totally realize it with that word that escapes him, it would all just meld back together and that, as they say, would be that.
Oh, but his naggings. His constant worrying and the demons he creates. Was it a crime to show him these things, or was it a crime to have him ther ein the first place, all puppy-dog eyed and curious? Either way, it can't be his own fault. You know, he didn't ask to be here. Or did he?
As a beast, he ate the question. Now it has fused itself to his soul. Beating -- with each heartbeat, his Hell is renovated to be the same and he can't for the life of him pound out the right notes to spell the answer to it. He seeks death, and death flees from him. And that state of being which is both life and death hides in that smallest of tinies. Well, so much for Adam, they say -- he will die soon enough. And when that apocalypse is finally and at long, winded last upon the face thereof, the Universe will once again find the peace that it never lost.
Im sorry, could you repeat that?
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:shock: Is it bad that that almost made sense to me? :shock:
Quote from: Lady Godiva:shock: Is it bad that that almost made sense to me? :shock:
Have you been taking Acid?
No, and thats the scary part. :shock:
Quote from: Lady GodivaNo, and thats the scary part. :shock:
Yes, this is bad. :shock:
This actually does make sense to me though I think it probably needs some editing. I think I know what the point is but it needs to be crystallized a bit more. Sometimes too much meandering for meandering's sake can blur the vision.
That's not meandering. Meandering pales in comparison to this quasi-existential trip we're all beating ourselves over our heads with. But anyway, there are 4 other parts to this I haven't felt like typing out yet, but when I do, it will probably make even less sense.
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This frightens me. :shock:
::hides::
why would you type out the fifth part first?
Cuz he's DISCORDIAN!
OMGWTFBBQLOLLAILPINEALGLAND23!
What about it confused you guys?
We are, we see and therefore the impressions exist. Do I follow still?
His self-illusionment causes him strife and irritating paradoxy and we make choices based on largely unfounded perceptions.
The inherent problem is not with ourselves nor the spaces we inhabit- it lies in translation and decoding.
it sounds like you understand what i wrote more than i do. bastard.
Hey, I'm just talking here. It's your writing that sparks the words.
I have a penchant for paraphrase.