Temporarily removed in order to improve it.
Cain,
annoying perfectionist
I must say I realy like this one
Thanks. I'm messing around with a new form of writing (for me, anyway) where there is just small "snapshots" like this. No real plot or story, start or end or character development or moral, just a small segment of...something.
I have a couple of slightly longer pieces (one semi-factual) but they need polishing before release.
Gives a strong sense of urgency and intrigue. Also like the concept a lot, being a fan of brevity.
I feel the urge to leave this message on random answering machines
yea that was my first impression as well :) mindfuck possibilities :)
about brevity, kind of like a haiku no? is also supposed to be a snapshot of a moment.
Quote from: triple zero on November 17, 2006, 01:40:25 PM
yea that was my first impression as well :) mindfuck possibilities :)
about brevity, kind of like a haiku no? is also supposed to be a snapshot of a moment.
Seed of now
planted in mind
forever
What on earth was this anyway?
I really wanna know.
Oh, whoops, forgot about that. I'll post it back up when I get back to my proper PC. Its not on this hard drive.
Cain you ever improved this
i liked this one