jaws drop in disbelief but also lack of preparation
i never told you how good you look in that shirt
why dont you take it off?
i got something to show you
at 5 am observe to the southwest appears venus
is cold a state of mind as well?
if it is i can heat you from here
your skill is inferior
your style is inferior
i make better mistakes
proper error
when somebody takes my belt i make another one
just sit and watch
some peoples thigh and ass muscles look square and flat
i dont pass judgment but i know the guy who does
sometimes he tells me
when you are dealing with something in the wrong place
you need to erode it and re-build at the same time
call it the other side of decay
the root of decadent is decay
decay is a stage of death
when something is decayed - it is said to be spoiled
a spoiled child is a child what has been killed
me and mine come together
we exist in many forms
we grow in numbers
when the work is done - we rest
every time you hear a genuine laugh - it means we showed up
you cant try to relax
it doesnt work that way
hot springs are naturally occurring
in deep sleep you do things that are difficult to do during wake hours
like recover
my restraining mechanism has been ruptured
code red
i watch from afar as anvils drop on enemy head
a chuckle from behind the door
something is up to no good
i know good
and it wont stop until its all good
in previous chapters we found the protagonist next to sisyphus
now he carries globes like atlas and laughs at your sissy fists
and hissy fits
carnivorous - 85% oblivious
stiff neck couldnt tell you how to rhyme or where the rhythm is
the only good news comes as a result of a perspective shift
as in: you need to accept things such as collapses of civilizations as natural processes in order to be able to take a look at the news and say "ahhh thats some good news"
the feeling that causes one to say "fuck it" and then leap
thats the one right there
leap - elbows out - daggers in hand - knees bent - plan on not landing - plan on taking everything with you
plan on pulling all living things out of hell as you tumble
the final plunge can take many forms and varies in duration anywhere from 1 second to 1 eternity
LHX, is this some kind of rhyme/rap work in progress? how am i supposed to read it? because some parts have rhyme and rhythm like rap-lyrics, but other parts don't.
is it supposed to be spoken/sung, or read?
(and please don't say, whatever feels right for you, because i was doing that anyway and not getting much of it)
one thing, it reads more intense/better than poetry (for me) ;-) (and that's a compliment)
there is some sort of flow to it
it is all off the dome
letting horizons expand themselves but trying to confine it in a way where it isnt just useless blathering
forms of communication that affect the audience
offers love and support for those who are looking for it and threatens those who might think they can get away with acting slick
because nobody can get away or dig deep enough
these are barstool ballads
stuff to sing while youre swingin
music to make love to inanimate objects by
i remember being young and destroying things and not knowing why i did it
just didnt seem right
how to symbolically represent a man
locked in steel shackles not steel - they can only hope to contain
trip-up
postpone
some say impede
they throw rocks to injure that which specializes in healing
side track
divert
they can tap the source - but never cap the source
back at the root the flow is too powerful
undiluted
'pure untampered or mixed in any form'
raw
untainted
a source
i broke my rib and it was for the best
once i start pouring it means overflow is imminent
anything that isnt extreme is only a period of transition
line-up the women and tell them it is time to make babies
the passing of time
the fleetingness of now
the calamity of static
the stability of motion
how many stories do you need to know?
i was him
i was him
i was him
i was X
stop waiting for people to give you directions
heed the signs
take what you conceptualize and see it through to fruition
mistakes are a fuel source
Quote from: LHX on March 27, 2007, 10:59:57 PMthese are barstool ballads
the barstool balladswell, if you're ever going to release an album, look no further for a good title ;-)
[though you'd have to include a track about the barstool experiment itself otherwise people will think it's drunkenman's songs :) :)]
can you do that? put the barstool experiment to rhyme? (just an idea, if you feel like it)