Hey, I need some help with lyrics here.
"They tried to tell me, I just wouldn't listen
Tried to show me the bars of my prison
My cell was something I had created
_______________________"
End the couplet with a rhyme that works best for me, and I'll include your name on the credits.
Promised no key but still I waited
A cold shell in which I incubated
a place where I just masturbated
you think it's cheesy now? well wait 'til it's grated
My Incarceration, I had fated. (tongue twisty I know)
QuotePromised no key but still I waited
:cheers:
QuoteA cold shell in which I incubated
:emo:
Quotea place where I just masturbated
:fap:
Quoteyou think it's cheesy now? well wait 'til it's grated
:RWHN:
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
___________________________
You're the best at being your own jailor
The only 2 words I'm even thinking of that will work are tailor and sailor. :?
Hmmm.
"It's too damn easy to chase your own tail"
...Hmmm.
Dumb, like your degree came from Baylor.
Fuck Texas.
Quote from: hunter s.durden on December 27, 2007, 03:53:41 PM
Dumb, like your degree came from Baylor.
Fuck Texas.
AWESOME.
I wish I could use that.
Quote from: LMNO on December 27, 2007, 01:27:26 PM
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
___________________________
You're the best at being your own jailor
the cat lady screamed out the winder of her trailer
:lulz: sorry
Tinker, tailor, soldier, sailor?
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Quote from: Cthulhu's Squidling on December 27, 2007, 06:11:11 PM
Quote from: LMNO on December 27, 2007, 01:27:26 PM
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
___________________________
You're the best at being your own jailor
the cat lady screamed out the winder of her trailer
:lulz: sorry
That's actually not bad. Doesn't really fit the mood of what I'm going for, but I like the image when put in context.
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're livin'
You are the Captain, not just a sailor
You're the best at being your own jailor
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're livin'
The cloth of reality is yours to tailor
You're the best at being your own jailor
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're livin'
You choose if you act like the White Whaler
You're the best at being your own jailor
Hmmm.....
Thanks, Rat. Some ideas there.
Freedom is something that can't be given
They say it comes from the way that you're living
So throw away your 'prescripted' inhaler
You're the best at being your own jailor
...I'm not entirely sure if 'inhaler' means what I suspect it to mean, with English being my second language and the such.
Quote from: LMNO on December 27, 2007, 12:31:41 PM
"They tried to tell me, I just wouldn’t listen
Tried to show me the bars of my prison
My cell was something I had created
Stuck outside because of the apple i ated"
Quote from: LMNO on December 27, 2007, 01:27:26 PMFreedom is something that can’t be given
They say it comes from the way that you’re living
You must bite and swallow your tail, or
forever be your own jailor
(might need a few more syllables, that last line, to fit the rhythm)
Pretend you're deep like Norman Mailer
And never realize that you are your own jailor
Heh. Clever. Also true. I think ECH has won the internets.
You keep on working but you still taste failure
Quote from: LMNO on December 31, 2007, 02:32:47 PM
Heh. Clever. Also true. I think ECH has won the internets.
:digtbk:
Quote from: Nigel on January 01, 2008, 01:11:06 AM
You keep on working but you still taste failure
Hold on a sec...
"failure" is a good rhyme here.... Dunno about the rest of it, tho'.
Work it baby