Principia Discordia

Principia Discordia => Think for Yourself, Schmuck! => Topic started by: barumunk on January 14, 2008, 08:59:54 AM

Title: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: barumunk on January 14, 2008, 08:59:54 AM
(http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/4e83a47685.jpg)


Yay  :D
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on January 14, 2008, 03:32:22 PM
Ver nice!
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Cramulus on January 14, 2008, 04:51:09 PM
hmmm - image isn't loading for me
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Triple Zero on January 14, 2008, 05:07:51 PM
also, the font is nearly unreadable, the resolution is too low and the JPEG artifacts will show up as blocky lightgrey smudges if you'd print it.

and the text is like it's bound to be going to be ignored for its angsty punky edgyness kind of thing.
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on January 14, 2008, 05:56:58 PM
Stop undermining my welcome wagon!
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: AFK on January 14, 2008, 06:31:45 PM
I would dial back the font size on the title.  That and the image are so commanding of the page that the casual observer may never cast their eyes upon the "meat."  Maybe reduce the size of the image a bit too.  but that's just my sensibilities. 
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Bebek Sincap Ratatosk on January 14, 2008, 11:07:56 PM
Quote from: barumunk on January 14, 2008, 08:59:54 AM
(http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/4e83a47685.jpg)


Yay  :D

Good warning shot over the bow, barumunk! Definately some areas for improvement in style and a little of the word smithing, but a very nice piece :)
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Cramulus on January 14, 2008, 11:19:24 PM
ah, now I can see it! weird.


Good show Barumunk. I like the quotes you've selected from Mangrove. Welldone!
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Triple Zero on January 14, 2008, 11:29:39 PM
Quote from: Nigel on January 14, 2008, 05:56:58 PM
Stop undermining my welcome wagon!

oh you weren't being serious?

i was worried there for a while.

yeah welcome wagon i was gonna do that too!

w00t baramunk, make another one!

say, purely out of interest, what software did you use to craft this wonderful piece of art?

also i think i love you. the effect with the pixels, it's so subtle, i was hardly realizing i might actually be able to read the text if i squint just the right way, so taken aback with the extraordinary beauty of this image i was, that reaally .. wow

just wow

i'm so speechless.

(is that better, nigel?)
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: barumunk on January 15, 2008, 06:13:12 AM
well i know the styling isnt exactly way out there, but its all vector, so  :wink: no pixelization when i print it out. the jpeg was just for posting on the forum quick, i used FreehandMX

its more like a public (dis) service, than a work of art  :D
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: keren or on January 15, 2008, 07:26:14 PM
Heh, come on. The Machine LOVES you.

With a few improvements, I can pictue this on random walls.
Title: Re: The Machine(TM) Flyer
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on January 16, 2008, 04:36:38 AM
Quote from: triple zero on January 14, 2008, 11:29:39 PM
Quote from: Nigel on January 14, 2008, 05:56:58 PM
Stop undermining my welcome wagon!

oh you weren't being serious?

i was worried there for a while.

yeah welcome wagon i was gonna do that too!

w00t baramunk, make another one!

say, purely out of interest, what software did you use to craft this wonderful piece of art?

also i think i love you. the effect with the pixels, it's so subtle, i was hardly realizing i might actually be able to read the text if i squint just the right way, so taken aback with the extraordinary beauty of this image i was, that reaally .. wow

just wow

i'm so speechless.

(is that better, nigel?)

I bitch slap you in my mind, sarcastic punk!