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Principia Discordia => Bring and Brag => Topic started by: MrFrizzleFry on March 03, 2009, 05:27:27 AM

Title: Web comic
Post by: MrFrizzleFry on March 03, 2009, 05:27:27 AM
These are simplified versions of the sketches I have in my sketchbook. I am using a laptop thingy that is not a mouse to draw the concept out though. I will upload the good ones later.
(http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt129/anthraxcat/Geico-2.jpg?t=1236058945)
edit- tried to make text more readable
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Fredfredly ⊂(◉‿◉)つ on March 03, 2009, 05:30:45 AM
make text bigger. hurting brain.
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: MrFrizzleFry on March 03, 2009, 05:34:36 AM
I made two of them so far (http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt129/anthraxcat/TheBirdsandTheBees.jpg?t=1236058438)
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: MrFrizzleFry on March 03, 2009, 05:35:20 AM
Quote from: Fred Noodle on March 03, 2009, 05:30:45 AM
make text bigger. hurting brain.
I will do next time. Also the quality is shit of the picture so it makes the text even harder to read.
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Fredfredly ⊂(◉‿◉)つ on March 03, 2009, 05:35:46 AM
lol i like the second one. and i can read it!
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: MrFrizzleFry on March 03, 2009, 05:43:11 AM
Quote from: Fred Noodle on March 03, 2009, 05:35:46 AM
lol i like the second one. and i can read it!

Thanks.
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Mu on March 03, 2009, 08:13:35 PM
Hehe, the second one made me lol also. Didn't get the first one though...
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Cramulus on March 03, 2009, 08:25:39 PM
:mittens: - I like these, and not just because they're in MS Paint.

My tip would be to pick a larger font, and put it in boxes or bubbles or something to make it easier to read
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on March 03, 2009, 08:53:27 PM
I like the second one a lot! By the way a bird's chute is called a "cloaca", dunno if you want to change that for accuracy.
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Cramulus on March 03, 2009, 09:16:05 PM
I think it's funnier as "vagina" (just like humans have a "vagina"!)
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: Zenpeanut on March 03, 2009, 10:04:53 PM
I like how the second one reads almost like a haiku if it weren't for the syllable count.
Title: Re: Web comic
Post by: P3nT4gR4m on March 05, 2009, 02:15:31 PM
change the font for a sans-serif one (arial, comic sans.. etc). Should be easier to read.