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Principia Discordia => Propaganda Depository => Topic started by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 10, 2009, 06:37:13 AM

Title: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 10, 2009, 06:37:13 AM
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Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 10, 2009, 06:40:48 AM
That's the rough draft, of course. 

Nivek will be doing Broken Little Town in tandem with Keelin's Spider series.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Iason Ouabache on October 10, 2009, 06:50:43 AM
:mittens: Are you planning on adding any color to them are leaving them as is?
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Captain Utopia on October 10, 2009, 07:06:18 AM
:mittens: Perfect!
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Sir Squid Diddimus on October 10, 2009, 07:21:01 AM
I like them as is.

Pretty great!  :mittens:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on October 10, 2009, 08:09:22 AM
YESSSSSS
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Nast on October 10, 2009, 08:30:10 AM
You guys are awesome.  :)

:mittens:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Triple Zero on October 10, 2009, 09:21:34 AM
Beautiful!
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Kai on October 10, 2009, 12:51:46 PM
My god that's so awesome.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: rong on October 10, 2009, 02:32:37 PM
these are truly great.  i love the handwriting. 

my only critique would be that the "feeding tube" person looks a little too japanimated (sic?) - and, shall we say . . . not fat?

it looks good, but i'm not sure if it's keeping with the metaphor.

i kinda pictured the average "feeding tube person" to look more like this guy:

(http://z.about.com/d/animatedtv/1/0/y/Q/athfcarl.jpg)
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 10, 2009, 02:57:39 PM
Quote from: rong on October 10, 2009, 02:32:37 PM
these are truly great.  i love the handwriting. 

my only critique would be that the "feeding tube" person looks a little too japanimated (sic?) - and, shall we say . . . not fat?

it looks good, but i'm not sure if it's keeping with the metaphor.

i kinda pictured the average "feeding tube person" to look more like this guy:

(http://z.about.com/d/animatedtv/1/0/y/Q/athfcarl.jpg)


Yeah, the handwriting was genius on Keelin's part.  And the Japanime is all she's up for, she's new at this.  Nivek's work is a lot more varied...I have the first galleys for Broken Little Town, but I need her to fix something before I post it.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Eater of Clowns on October 10, 2009, 03:38:21 PM
This is wonderful.  It's like a children's book got invaded and desecrated.

As for the feeding tube person, I think it's good as it is.  The point of the web is that it gets everyone regardless of age, beauty, etc.

Plus, not every cough potato or teevee addict looks like Carl.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: rong on October 10, 2009, 03:48:52 PM
Quote from: Eater of Clowns on October 10, 2009, 03:38:21 PM
Plus, not every cough potato or teevee addict looks like Carl.

point taken
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Suu on October 10, 2009, 04:20:57 PM
Quote from: Eater of Clowns on October 10, 2009, 03:38:21 PM

Plus, not every cough potato or teevee addict looks like Carl.

They do if they're from Northern New Jersey.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Kai on October 10, 2009, 06:32:49 PM
I just gotta say, that the creepy cut off head and smile on the guy in the suit in the last panel next to the spider makes the whole damn thing. So fucking perfect.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 11, 2009, 07:44:02 AM
Quote from: Kai on October 10, 2009, 06:32:49 PM
I just gotta say, that the creepy cut off head and smile on the guy in the suit in the last panel next to the spider makes the whole damn thing. So fucking perfect.

Wait til you see Nivek's first page (for Broken Town).  Too tired to scan tonight, will post en manana.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Ari on October 11, 2009, 10:22:40 AM
:mittens: :mittens: :mittens:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: LMNO on October 11, 2009, 07:45:03 PM
That is really, really good.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Cramulus on October 11, 2009, 08:42:50 PM
Rah!

:mittens:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Sister_Gothique on October 12, 2009, 05:13:27 PM
That's pretty fuckin' epic. I mees her!
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 12, 2009, 05:19:09 PM
Quote from: Sister_Gothique on October 12, 2009, 05:13:27 PM
That's pretty fuckin' epic. I mees her!

She misses you, too.  Stun your boyfriend and move back here.  Bring Frank, too.

This town sucks without you being here.   :argh!:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Telarus on October 13, 2009, 04:39:41 AM
Quote from: Cramulus on October 11, 2009, 08:42:50 PM
Rah!

:mittens:

:mittens: x5
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Richter on October 13, 2009, 01:15:25 PM
Looks great.  MORE.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Cainad (dec.) on October 13, 2009, 10:07:01 PM
SWOTE!
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Bu🤠ns on October 18, 2009, 04:46:04 AM
WOAH -- how'd i miss this earlier~ 

:DAMN:

:mittens:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 20, 2009, 05:41:54 PM
More on the way, as my daughter's schoolwork permits.

She gets a primo laptop and a Wacom tablet if she gets all As and Bs, and she's gotten a little serious about it.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on October 20, 2009, 07:47:17 PM
SWEEET

I just had a strong spate of child-adoration. I think my maternal glands released a bunch of chemicals or something.

I wish my oldest and your girl could hang out, they seem to have a lot in common. Other than being a couple years apart in age. And my girl is young for her age. She's a geeky sweet little doll-girl who still loves her mama... by this age, my friends' kids were calling their moms bitches. I can't even imagine my girlet saying something like that.

Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Triple Zero on October 20, 2009, 07:49:38 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on October 20, 2009, 05:41:54 PM
More on the way, as my daughter's schoolwork permits.

She gets a primo laptop and a Wacom tablet if she gets all As and Bs, and she's gotten a little serious about it.

Wacom tablets are awesome. With her creativity I bet she will create some really kickass stuff on it.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on October 20, 2009, 08:08:48 PM
Quote from: Triple Zero on October 20, 2009, 07:49:38 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on October 20, 2009, 05:41:54 PM
More on the way, as my daughter's schoolwork permits.

She gets a primo laptop and a Wacom tablet if she gets all As and Bs, and she's gotten a little serious about it.

Wacom tablets are awesome. With her creativity I bet she will create some really kickass stuff on it.

Yeah, well, the economy is about to take another big poop, so I'm trying to give my kids some good times to have memories of if things get really bad.

I mean, it's never too late to have a happy childhood, but why wait?
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on October 20, 2009, 08:51:36 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on October 20, 2009, 08:08:48 PM
Quote from: Triple Zero on October 20, 2009, 07:49:38 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on October 20, 2009, 05:41:54 PM
More on the way, as my daughter's schoolwork permits.

She gets a primo laptop and a Wacom tablet if she gets all As and Bs, and she's gotten a little serious about it.

Wacom tablets are awesome. With her creativity I bet she will create some really kickass stuff on it.

Yeah, well, the economy is about to take another big poop, so I'm trying to give my kids some good times to have memories of if things get really bad.

I mean, it's never too late to have a happy childhood, but why wait?

Good policy. This is why the kids ate beans for a week but my boy got a goddamn bicycle for his birthday.

Luckily, the kids get excited at the idea of Mom's chili con carne.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: . on October 25, 2009, 05:24:24 AM
I can't wait to see what more she comes up with, Roger. She's got a hell of a lot of talent! The tablet will definitely help alot with her artwork.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on October 25, 2009, 08:37:28 AM
That little girl is talent incarnate. You know it.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: . on October 26, 2009, 06:15:12 AM
Quote from: Nigel on October 25, 2009, 08:37:28 AM
That little girl is talent incarnate. You know it.

Definitely! :D
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Sister_Gothique on October 28, 2009, 10:57:29 AM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on October 12, 2009, 05:19:09 PM
Quote from: Sister_Gothique on October 12, 2009, 05:13:27 PM
That's pretty fuckin' epic. I mees her!

She misses you, too.  Stun your boyfriend and move back here.  Bring Frank, too.

This town sucks without you being here.   :argh!:
That town sucked WITH me there, Rog. It was just much more bearable.



Good god! Will that alarm clock never cease?! :argh!:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: P3nT4gR4m on October 29, 2009, 12:17:43 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on October 10, 2009, 06:37:13 AM
(http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr126/TGRR/scan0003.jpg)

(http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr126/TGRR/scan0004.jpg)

(http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr126/TGRR/scan0005.jpg)

(http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr126/TGRR/scan0006.jpg)

(http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr126/TGRR/scan0007.jpg)

(http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/rr126/TGRR/scan0008.jpg)

That is one of the most awesome things I've seen all year! :mittens:
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 02:44:05 PM
Do we know if these are going to be inked, or if they will remain pencil sketches?
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on November 06, 2009, 03:29:06 PM
Quote from: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 02:44:05 PM
Do we know if these are going to be inked, or if they will remain pencil sketches?

They're going to be inked, mostly as a training exercise.  Nivek has graciously volunteered to teach my daughter some techniques beyond manga (my daughter has gotten too comfortable with manga, and needs to branch out a bit).
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 03:35:33 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on November 06, 2009, 03:29:06 PM
Quote from: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 02:44:05 PM
Do we know if these are going to be inked, or if they will remain pencil sketches?

They're going to be inked, mostly as a training exercise.  Nivek has graciously volunteered to teach my daughter some techniques beyond manga (my daughter has gotten too comfortable with manga, and needs to branch out a bit).

Because it's a slippery slope, and the slime pit at the bottom is... Hentai.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: The Good Reverend Roger on November 06, 2009, 03:50:01 PM
Quote from: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 03:35:33 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on November 06, 2009, 03:29:06 PM
Quote from: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 02:44:05 PM
Do we know if these are going to be inked, or if they will remain pencil sketches?

They're going to be inked, mostly as a training exercise.  Nivek has graciously volunteered to teach my daughter some techniques beyond manga (my daughter has gotten too comfortable with manga, and needs to branch out a bit).

Because it's a slippery slope, and the slime pit at the bottom is... Hentai.

Naw, not in her case.  In her case, she got good at something, and stopped trying anything else.  That's just changed.

It's easy to get in a rut.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: . on November 08, 2009, 10:55:23 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on November 06, 2009, 03:50:01 PM
Quote from: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 03:35:33 PM
Quote from: The Good Reverend Roger on November 06, 2009, 03:29:06 PM
Quote from: LMNO on November 06, 2009, 02:44:05 PM
Do we know if these are going to be inked, or if they will remain pencil sketches?

They're going to be inked, mostly as a training exercise.  Nivek has graciously volunteered to teach my daughter some techniques beyond manga (my daughter has gotten too comfortable with manga, and needs to branch out a bit).

Because it's a slippery slope, and the slime pit at the bottom is... Hentai.

Naw, not in her case.  In her case, she got good at something, and stopped trying anything else.  That's just changed.

It's easy to get in a rut.

It took me about two years to get out of anime since i had started drawing it as a serious venture. Then I got tired of doing the same thing. The best thing is just to push her into something else and more often than not she'll just drop anime and do something of her own accord. Its more of a task of showing her that anime isn't all there is that is edgey. The anime market is over saturated.
Title: Re: Galleys for HEY, LMNO
Post by: Roaring Biscuit! on November 09, 2009, 01:21:13 AM
art style totally reminds me of my friends art:

http://mad-panda.deviantart.com/art/marvellous-103640347 (http://mad-panda.deviantart.com/art/marvellous-103640347)

i think its mostly the writing.

also.  awesome.