Principia Discordia

Principia Discordia => Bring and Brag => Topic started by: NotPublished on January 05, 2010, 02:49:15 AM

Title: Playing
Post by: NotPublished on January 05, 2010, 02:49:15 AM
I move about,
My chin clasped on theirs,
Resting myself -
We're in perfect harmony

We move,
We sway,
We caress.
My very soul is filled with joy.

I stroke her repeatedly,
Softly - Like a little song bird
I restrain my very nature
She sings back in kind. As is her simple request

It takes hours of practice,
I beat many habits
I go back in again -
And play my violin.
Title: Re: Playing
Post by: NotPublished on January 05, 2010, 02:49:47 AM
God I write much crap when I'm bored ... I love train rides :D Thought I'd share it with you guys  :oops:

VOMIT

(eta: Does anyone know of a website where I can just submit anything I write? So the public can view and comment on it ... I feel like trying one of those places)
Title: Re: Playing
Post by: Pariah on January 09, 2010, 02:07:27 AM
everypoet.org
Title: Re: Playing
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on January 09, 2010, 02:54:48 AM
I really like the premise. Need to work on rhythm a bit. :)
Title: Re: Playing
Post by: Mesozoic Mister Nigel on January 09, 2010, 02:55:12 AM
Quote from: Pariah? on January 09, 2010, 02:07:27 AM
everypoet.org

:lulz: