Sorry, guys: I'm removing everything that I am submitting for publication. Not to be a jerk, just to cover my ass.
That's just a first draft, I think it needs to be expanded a bit.
I am also stewing around "When Mommy Can't Sleep."
Man, that was depressing. :horrormirth:
"Sometimes, Mommy can't sleep.
So she asks me to pour her a glass of wine."
:lulz: Thanks, it's what I do.
"When Mommy Can't Sleep" starts out,
When Mommy can't sleep, she tosses and turns a lot.
Sometimes, when Mommy can't sleep, she cries. I can hear her through the wall.
When I asked her, she said she was crying because she was so frustrated about not being able to fall asleep.
When Mommy can't sleep, sometimes she gets up and sits on the porch.
Wow! Maybe it's just all the childrens books I've been reading lately, but this stuff really resonates and then leaves me feeling slightly stunned. But I can't stop reading it regardless. Awesome work.
Oh my god that made me sad argh
:sad: geh
well written, i like it, but i'm sad now.
maybe i'm getting c lose to menopause. i'm sad at everything lately.
"the soap bubble popped and now it's DEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD! WHAAAAAAAA"
"Just-So Stories for a New Century."
Somewhere, Rudyard Kipling is chewing the rotten remains of his arms off. Well done.
TGRR,
Knows we have to traumatize the little bastards if they're to have any chance at all.
We need a "hollow laugh" smiley.
Quote from: The Right Reverend Nigel on January 18, 2010, 08:29:45 AM
We need a "hollow laugh" smiley.
I have just the thing, but it will have to wait until I get home.
Someone get this shit out of my thread.
EDIT: Done.
- Roger
:mittens:
Thanks TGRR! :)