I'm an animal
Just a dirty fucking animal
I'm not in control
I don't got no soul
I live in a hole
Full of pop tarts and remote controls
I've broken all my favourite things
I tried to tie them back together with string
but it's useless
I couldn't care less
I just took a shit in my best dress
trying to impress
a female
built like a brick whale
with acne you could read like braille
so I set sail
and chased my tail
I'm just a horny fucking animal
And now I got a choice to make
give or take
love or hate
fix or break
fall asleep or stay awake
screaming at the teevee
pressing the red button to save me
voting for the one I like the best
just the same as all the rest
but it's a test
and I can't fail
I try to catch my tail
I'm just a stupid fucking animal
Barking at my reflection in the mirror
The more I back off the more it gets nearer
and it's becoming clearer
even in the fog behind my eyes
they tried to sell me alibis
a pack of lies
for a buck-o-five
with the option to supersize
wet cut and blow dried
those motherfuckers lied
they're all just dirty fucking animals!
Damn.
I like it
I like how you've gotten away with the irregular meter
some of the rhymes are a bit simple, but still well put together
My other reaction is that you're doing a little bit of this (http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb163/wompcabal/forum/smileydisgust.gif)
and a bit of this:
(http://imgs.xkcd.com/comics/sheeple.png)
I mean, people are weak, filthy, impulsive wastrels. You don't claim to be any better. So what? Should we change how we act? Can we change how we act? Are you addressing somebody who resonates with the Noble Savage myth, the idea that deep down, humans are essentially good and our creations make us bad? What now?
Haha, you've pretty much nailed exactly what I was trying to say but it wasn't a question. I'm not trying to give an answer or try to encourage others to do so. Just thought it was funny is all :D