Tender flesh, like fruits for picking. Scent of breath, warm lips and licking.
Sticky sliding smooth, insisting. Biting nibble no resisting.
Quiver closely then deliver, shiver slightly, flowing river.
Shudder, flutter, melt like butter. It's just once, let's have another.
Time can stop for drops of sweat, the wet and hot, let's not forget...
...The seconds passing, as we're gasping for what we've got, and haven't yet.
There's no drug I could desire that could fly me any higher.
Tire never, skin of fire, in this place where we conspire.
With a sigh the driving hastens, pacing steady, but not racing.
Face to face, no waste of tasting, most basic form of communication.
In moments of anticipation, there exists not one equation...
...For position and momentum in the quantum state of this sensation.
Wow, Dimo, this is HOT.
Quote from: Luna on September 04, 2011, 09:26:20 AM
Wow, Dimo, this is HOT.
I'm the only dude I know that gets laid and then goes and writes mediocre poetry. But thanks, just the same.
That wasn't mediocre.
Quote from: Dimocritus on September 04, 2011, 04:41:11 PM
Quote from: Luna on September 04, 2011, 09:26:20 AM
Wow, Dimo, this is HOT.
I'm the only dude I know that gets laid and then goes and writes mediocre poetry. But thanks, just the same.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marquis_de_Sade
:mittens:
Quote from: Nigel on September 04, 2011, 06:16:20 PM
That wasn't mediocre.
Thanks. That's nice to hear coming from you, I know you know your poetry, and I've seen you destroy peoples attempts in the past. I'm no poet, but for some reason I tend to dabble from time to time. And it's nice to know, from someone that knows what they're talking about, that it's not all bad.
All poetry is mediocre, except for the stuff that outright sucks. This doesn't outright suck.
Quote from: Fuck You One-Eye on September 05, 2011, 03:15:57 PM
All poetry is mediocre, except for the stuff that outright sucks. This doesn't outright suck.
:lulz: :lulz: and agreed, and thanks.
I like the part about the butter. Very well done!
:lulz:
Quote from: Doktor Howl on September 05, 2011, 04:13:57 AM
Quote from: Dimocritus on September 04, 2011, 04:41:11 PM
Quote from: Luna on September 04, 2011, 09:26:20 AM
Wow, Dimo, this is HOT.
I'm the only dude I know that gets laid and then goes and writes mediocre poetry. But thanks, just the same.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marquis_de_Sade
Heh, good point.
Quote from: Murmur on September 08, 2011, 12:15:36 AM
I like the part about the butter. Very well done!
:lulz:
Thanks, but have we met?
I'm dimo, pleased to meet you. Who the F R U?
Quote from: Dimocritus on September 04, 2011, 04:41:11 PM
I'm the only dude I know that gets laid and then goes and writes mediocre poetry. But thanks, just the same.
Yes, the rest of us just roll the fuck over and go to sleep. ;)